Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Ok, maybe sunset is in a nightmare.
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yes and no she was having what is sometimes called a waking nightmare meaning she was fully awake but her mind couldn't tell the difference between fantasy and reality. I look forward to your thoughts on the next chapter once it is up and ready for review.
Oh shoot. I'd say she's losing her mind, but...................it already happened.
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Soooo kinda like sleep paralysis but you can move
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yes, something like that.
This is getting surreal now.
very nice, i like how you made the cmc's please sound like 'oh shit we fucked up, lets apologize and make it all go away', thats not sarcasm by the way i'm really enjoying this.
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Thank you for the comment I hope you will enjoy the next chapter once it comes out.
Oh my. Sunset is hallucinating, isn't she? She's being given glimpses of the past, and the kid is really making sure she's haunted. It's trying to give her a way out and yet, there's nothing.
A little bit of a call back- I remember the scene well enough. You're right, they really could have stopped things. Especially Dash. They do have something, coming for it..but really, we are seeing a bit of a darker path of life than what is usual.
I still love it.
Anyway!
I was surprised that we saw that she has basically becoming a storm hold. These new powers means things are going to get very messy if the girls do go one to one. It's going to be hard for even Summer to handle that, I will admit. Though that's if they decide to go for it after all. Hmmm, this really is quite a change and challenge. Mmm! I can't wait to see what else is going to happen, especially with what she was hit with!
Sweet Celestia Daybringer...Sunset cannot get a bucking break can she?! First she's framed for something she didn't do, she's treated like the Black Plauge by practically the entire school, loses her friends, gets beaten up, gets hurt in the worst way possible by the one girl she had feelings for, is pushed to take her own life, resurrects into a the she-demon from the Fall Formal, and now she's having hallucinations of herself?!
......
For Faust's sake...how long will this madness continue before she finally stops hurting?! HOW LONG?!
Great chapter by the way!
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Thanks, for the wonderful comment and yes the madness will end soon not to worry she will get a break and nice one at that.
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Thank Celestia!!!
And your welcome! I aim to please!
Also, in case your wondering, Daybringer is actually Celestia's last name. Not the Equestria girls Celestia, but her Princess counterpart.
Huh I wonder whats happening..... Still pretty interesting though I can't wait to see what happens next.
Hope ya have a wonderful christmas
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Thank you and do the same. Ok, so basically Sunset is losing her mind the child in this chapter was supposed to be her innocence that she lost when Musical Skies died and now that she has to choose between being good or evil that single choice is starting to unravel her mind.
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Ahhhhhh I see, well then this can only lead to two endings of the spectrum if things continue the way I think their going to continue.
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So Its like her inner thoughts are battling for control over what her fate should be?
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Yes the good side of her doesn't want her to be evil while the demon or demonic side wants her to become evil so both sides are battling each other. Which is why she has wings of both black and silver in many mythologies that have demons with either black or silver wings that demon MUST choose between good or evil. Black is more used for pure evil and Silver is used for a transition between the two between good and evil.