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Gah...more darkness.
And at least Applejack realized her mistakes and let Sunset go.
Yeah, they kinda did.
Just accept their offer Sonata...trust me, they'll help you.
It's kind of too late for that Applejack.
I highly doubt they'll still be friends after all of this, though AJ does have a point. Sunset needs to make new friends. New better friends.
Celestia....
Ouch.
Hopefully.
Wow, that was a really intense and dramatic chapter! Especially with the part having Celestia and Luna! To know that Celestia had to make such a desicion is a real buck to the gut. I really hope that she gets through this, because at the rate that she's going, its possible that she could lose all sanity. Luna was smart not to let her go back to Equestria.
As for Sunset...I hope she's finally able to get some true genuine everlasting happiness in her life...with new friends added to the mix. As for the Rainbooms and the CMC...well...this will be one event that they'll never forget, and one that'll hopefully be used as a lesson to not let jealousy cloud your judgment, and be a real friend to some pony instead of treating them as if they were a mere charity case.
I'm disappointed didn't see the confrontation between Apple Jack and Fluttershy. seems you just skipped it.
also mad did not put more on Dash and how she feels on losing Sunset to Sonata because she was so stupid.
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Fluttershy isn't at the hospital she and Applejack will have their chapter in just a little bit Applejack needed to check on her family before heading home. I will show the chapter that Applejack and Fluttershy will be in and I will show them getting into it I needed to show Applejack's feelings on the matter first and leave Fluttershy out of it in order to bring those two in one full chapter were they have it out besides the hospital was no place for that sort of thing.
90 Really? i thought you skipped it, the way Applejack was acting, it read like she was told what she did.
her guilt and sorrow, and how she felt so bad, commenting how she ruined Sunset's life.
Oh man this will only confirm how badly she screwed up and make her feel worse. Whistles!
Will there be a chapter where Rainbow reacts fully to everything?
I mean she lost Sunset...TWICE, one to death because she help drive her to kill herself, and she came back, but now lost her to another girl as she ruined any chance they had.
I see her still processing everything, and soon will hit her like semi truck.
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yes, she confided her feelings on how she acted towards Sunset towards her former friend and towards her brother but reread the part where she asks 'how could I be so selfish?' that line in a prelude to the next chapter. The hospital is NO place for what is about to happen with Fluttershy and Applejacks characters I am currently writing their chapter as I type this up. I hope to have it posted in a few days if not by the end of next week. yes, there will be a chapter showing Rainbow fully realizing her mistakes.
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Look forward to it. Also felt a little sorry for Celestia, she really screwed up her relations with her daughter, not sure can be ever fixed.
Never commented on the last chapter, but glad they tore in those two Goddesses over what they done.
They left a huge mess in the end.
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yes, but I have yet to show the reason Eventide hates her mother so much. I will show this after I take care of Fluttershy and Applejacks chapter.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHMYGOD Applejack while what you said was very noble and Im glad you finally see the error of your ways you also messed up again, Sunset said she would give you a second chance but you think that she deserves to make new friends and forget about you even though Sunset still care's about you guys, WHY? Im glad Big Mac and Granny Smith are doing ok and that Gilda will soon reunite with her grandfather. Man I wasn't expecting Tia to go berserk like that the war she used to be in must have been a living nightmare but then again there are cases where ex war veterans suffer from flashbacks due to a certain event out on the field of battle. Also I had a feeling that Luna would volunteer to go through the portal especially after that little episode last night who knows the kind of flashback and hallucinations her sister would have, no telling what would happen to her especially since she doesn't know how the world of equestria works. TBH Summer actually did the right thing Celestia was kind of being stubborn she was literally asking for a one way ticket to her grave someone had to knock some sense into her. I hope Luna will be alright at least good ol Twilight will be right by her side + it will give her a chance to talk to Princess Celestia and get answer's about why she kept this secret from her. Cant wait for the next chapter i apologize if this comment was long this chapter was just great i had to express my opinions.
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Thank you so very kindly for the wonderful comment I look very much forward to reading your next comment when I get another chapter out
Oh so much to digest in this one!
Celestias war days, her PTSD explained, a cunning little trick to say Fourth of July is coming up and more! Thanks for that.
I really did see some powerfully imagery from this one. Whether it be because we saw in her eyes what she didn't want us to see, Celestias part could have been it's own chapter with how much you put out for us.
As for Sunset being moved and the group finally getting the chance, we see guilt is burning up inside them so they decided to let the one they hurt free. Though knowing she wants them back and the five too scared to take to it because they feel unworthy..well that's just rough all across the board. Sunset could have screamed out 'No!' at any time, because I suppose the punishment was that in her eyes then that they couldn't be friends for a while. That hurt more than other punishments perhaps.
i wonder how deeply the group is going to push it when they try to figure out what they should really do. Though I'm surprised about what is happening, I'm pretty sure we haven't seen the last of any of this conflict. Sunset though being alright and in the Cakes care is a good hold over though. I hope Sonata and Sunset heal together especially after all the pain they went through.
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Thank you for the comment I look very much forward to reading your next comment once I get another chapter up and posted. I will be doing Fluttershy's and Applejacks chapter next so I look forward to what you will think of it once it is ready for review.
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I am so sorry I didn't get back to your comment until now the truth is I didn't see your comments until today. Yeah I know the cmc are in for some major trouble keep reading I hope you will enjoy what happens to them and how they finally deal with what they did.
Diffusion.
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It would help to know which chapter you read caused you to write your comment as you did so that I can better help you to understand the story.
You spelled "Sweet Apple Acres" as "Sweet Apple arcs"
You used Chrysalis's name once when you meant to use Chrystalis's
There's a whole section between Luna's thoughts and Summer's thoughts that's italicized, like you missed a /i after Luna's
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Can you type the chapter that this is in so I can look it over and fix it thank you so much.