Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Being a fan of many things, hearing those words though.
"I just want a family who will love me."
Sunset is so awash in a disaster that she didn't even intend.
It makes me wonder if they knew they were in an Avalanche zone? I mean, if a zap from a young unicorn could cause a full avalanche, you'd think they'd know to at least set up warnings or that the fight/ringing of the bell would cause some confusion for them.
The fact that Pony Cheerilee disrespected the wishes of her chosen in that way also hurts. In a land of magic where friendship is such, Cheerilee must not have been feeling very magical from then on out. I wonder if she has regrets about it?
There's also a few other things that bring to mind about this. Timber Wolves are quite an easy scapegoat for things in all honesty. Though true, their terrible breath, dangerous fangs and wood-like repairing body does make them quite a capable opponent. Though the Charred Timber Wolf? Makes me wonder indeed!
Still, if we're having this kind of foreshadowing, I really am waiting for that moment when she can't help but say she's done.
Mmm another fun chapter, and glad to see that we have some connections being made between the two, but this will be dashed further as we continue from how dark the world is becoming.
Chiro Dark Rating- 2%
No deaths have happened, but we're starting to see some bad things ahead.
Another great chapter for this amazing story, I really can't wait for more!
I have bad feeling that the next chapter and the other chapters will not be a pleasant and peaceful ride for everyone and even Sunset.
7843008 Thank you for the wonderful comment the next chapter will take place the following morning just before Luna, Celestia and Mr. Cake and his wife get to Cheerilee's house to talk with Sunset about the drinking.
7844160 There is never a need for you to be sorry for anything that you comment on within this story. I like reading your comments it helps me to be a better writer and to be help build this story.
7844170 Woah why didn't your reply notificate me? That's the second time it's done that... I am legitimately worried right now... I may have missed previous replies from over 3 months ago... I don't know, something's wrong with my FimFiction. It's like Sp00n's Left 4 Dead all over again.
7844187 I have no idea why that happened I think there might be something wrong with the website yet I don't know for sure. I have been waiting for some time now for a new story to post. I hope it gets posted soon. I can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter within this story.
7844203 Okay it worked for this comment. I am, I don't know. Can't wait for the next chapter though.
7844227 I should have it in a few days I just have to do a little research first before I type it up and give it to Icecreammac for editing
7853119 I am happy to see you are still reading this story I hope to read more comments from you soon. I will check out your transformers story line arc in just a little while. Thank you so much for the delightful comment I hope you have a wonderful day filled with laughter and happy smiles.
Now I want to give Sunset a hug...
I think I see what's going on here. If Summer Sunrise is the embodiment of evil, then perhaps the other clones are embodiments of other aspects. Considering everything Sunset's gone through up until this point, perhaps she's the embodiment of bad luck, of being attacked, or something along those lines.
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Ladies and gentlemen, I think we have a Church scenario going on here.
Sorry but I'm bailing on this story, to many extra side stories going on that are overshadowing what I thought this was supposed to be about.
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alright well whatever, thanks for your comment.