Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Cue Sad violin music. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ODcC5z6Ca0
Hmmmm interesting, seems like Sunset is in for a tough time. You know I dont really get to see Sisterly Adagio and Aria towards Sonata all that much, its very refreshing. While the chapter seemed a bit shorter than most, it still had that air of greatness and well writtenness that makes this story so great and stand out...... Although I'm still wondering what the hell happened to Vinyl Scratch and Octavia. Or how the Rainbooms+twi are gonna deal with Sunset's goal, especially when they hear about her from the Cakes.
Oh Luna the amount of Guilt they must feel each time they see them must be killing.
Anyway can't wait for the next chapter.
Hope ya have a wonderful day.
Sincerely,
Sar Meister
I really didn't expect Sunset to run into the Cakes again considering everything. Though now she's making sure she's going to have one heck of an interesting time. Kindness shall die while Chaos Rages.
I do think that can and will be a little bit true considering how dark this particular thing has gotten.
I'm glad Summer and Gilda are going to try and save the Crusaders, even if it's just to save her skin.
Knowing that Sunset is back in anyway has very much disrupted a good chunk of the lives of CHS since she had been dead before. Though with that poem/song. Mmm so many things to see and show. Still, the Queen of the Furies? Mmmm nice touch, and we're going to get a few interesting tidbits from who else has shown up of course.
The Season Finale for 7 by the by, should be watched. Something interesting is going to happen, I can tell you that much.
Still either way, I didn't expect the Sirens to get any of this, and yet keeping Sonata away may not be very possible unless she actually looks after her. So far, with how she's chosen though, Sonata may go through anyway.
Poor Mr. and Mrs. Cake. Their daughter returns to live and she's too traumatized to even let them near her. That must be terrible for dedicated parents like them.
Heh. Megaera. Called it.
Also, what a plot twist. Does that mean that Celestia was lying? Or is the local version of the Fury's Heart still in circulation?
Not sure which possibility could cause a bigger disaster. I imagine Eventide getting her hands on it.
The prophecy sounds interesting though maybe you should cut back on the rhymes a bit. Might just be me but i find it difficult to take knittelverses seriously. Prophecies can be great tools with all kinds of layered symbolism and the constant rhyming just takes the gravity out of it. And it kind of forces you to cut back on potential poetic phrasings in order to make the rhyme fit
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I'll take that into full consideration the next time I create a prophecy. Thanks for the comment by the way I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter once I get it ready for review.
Is this foreshadowing? Will Fluttershy die, and cause Discord to seek vengeance?
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It is a foreshadow of what might happen to Fluttershy if Principal Celestia cannot get Discord to change things.
This fic isn't even close to being done, is it? And I mean that in a good way.
I hope Mrs Cakes baby is ok after that attack they almost lost Sunset I would break a mothers heart to see an unborn die. Wouldn't be surprised if they are forced to team up with the mane 5 to save their baby girl considering it was mostly their fault. lets hope Sunrise and Gilda locate the crusaders before its too late and Sunset comes to her senses. I look forward to the next chapter. BTW I know this might seem like an old question and I"m sure she must have covered it in one of the previous chapters but how did Luna figure out it was the crusaders did they confess or did she discover them?
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Luna figured it out when Sweetie Belle dropped her phone I have it mentioned as such I think in the hospital chapter but I am not sure if that is the right chapter so you'll have to reread the story starting from that chapter on down. As Luna was about to hand the phone back to Sweetie Belle her thumb pressed the Playback tab on the phone and she, along with her two friends Applebloom and Scootaloo all heard the confession thus Luna was able to figure it out.
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Thank you I am currently working on the next chapter and I hope to have it posted soon. I look forward to your thoughts on it once it is up and ready for review.
wow talk about for shadowing, i think i have an idea of a few things to happen like twilight and the maiden being taken out of the fight though the mirror. but dam all of that sounds horrible, i feel like i have alot more to say about the prophecy but honestly dont know how to put it or where to start but anyways great job.
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Thank you so much for the most wonderful comment I look very much forward to what your thoughts will be on the next chapter once I get the next one out and ready for review.
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If you are willing to foreshadow please keep reading the story I hope you will enjoy the rest of it. I will be adding another chapter soon.