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I don't get it.
.............Save as in download.....or save as in rescue?
7675554 She passes out before she can finish what she has to say don't worry I will have Chrysalis complete what she is suppose to say to Celestia in their final chapter together. So that what she says here makes more sense.
7675557 ahhh ok
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I don't quite understand what you do not get in this chapter if you can explain I will be more than happy to explain further I just need to know what you don't get within this chapter so that I can help you understand.
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Mainly a bit confused about those sudden relations with Chrysalis. Don't let it discourage you, I'm sure it'll be cleared up with future chapters
7675683 ah ok yes it will be cleared up in Celestia's and Chryalis's last chapter.
So that's why Chrysalis was there.
Shame on Celestia for killing Chrysalis's daughter, and shame on Chrysalis for killing Celestia's daughter.
7678500 Thank you that meant so much me to me I really do hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
7678627 Celestia didn't actually kill Chrysalis's daughter Celestia stated it was a accident. It will be later shown in another chapter what actually happened.
7679072 If you say so. But still, shame on both of them.
7680096 Reread the chapter you'll see that Celestia admits to it being an accident
7680136 I read that. It's just that sometimes you can't trust royalty. (Celestia)
Suddenly Chrysalis with little to no back story, with heavy emphasis on how emotional this should be when we've had no time in this story to connect to either of them, talking about a shared past that Celestia doesn't know about, then suddenly does.
Almost had me thinking Sunset was Chrysalis' daughter and Celestia didn't know, so when she had her fight with Sunset and Sunset disappeared Chrysalis thought she died. Which would have fit and been pretty cool, but then Celestia disproves that by suddenly knowing Chrysalis and having apparently been friends with her and knowing about Sunset and Crystal Ridge.
So she can't know that Sunset is Crystalis because with how emotional this was written she would tell Chrysalis
And
She can't not know that Sunset is Crystalis because her knowledge of Crystal Ridge would have revealed who she was
So Sunset can't be Crystalis, but now I'm left wondering what the point of this side arc is.
It's too detailed to be an excuse for Twilight not to help Sunset and not really detailed enough to be coherent to the rest of the story.
It feels like this should have come after we find out what Sunset's connection to Crystal Ridge is or with more knowledge of Celestia in this story because it comes off like a climactic final show down between a character just introduced and a background character. I'm not sure though maybe it's just me.
7680858 There will be more added to Chrysalis and Celestia's back story in a latter chapter I am trying to hold off a bit on what happened at Crystal Ridge because I want to save it for the the near ending chapter. Yes I will do a few more chapters showing more detail with Chryalis and Celestia's backstory or at least try to.
I will claim the last Oreo!
so is Chrysalis dead?
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No Chrysalis isn't dead