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Damn, and when the truth comes out that Sunset isn't Anon-A-Miss, the whole school that demonized her is going to suffer through the grief and guilt. They'll try to justify their actions, but in the end it won't matter.
And after blame, there's going to be some punishment. Next is the Crusaders.
There's going to be an investigation for what happened to Sunset, and those responsible. If you push someone to commit suicide, you're guilty of murder and using the internet and cyberbullying as weapons.
8039993 I am so glad that you liked it I look forward to what you think of the next chapter.
8039996 that actually helps with the next chapter thanks so much for helping me with that. I'll get to work on the next chapter later on tonight I look very much forward to your thoughts another chapter.
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Like is a strong word. I don't like using depressing elements, but we use them when the story calls for them and the storyline has gotten to that point. So, just PM with the details of next chapter? Will it be "Grief" or "Retribution"?
NO, SUNSET!!!!!!!
Poor sunset.
I wonder how all this will end.
8040025 When it does end it will be very bad for one character if I however say anything more it will wreck the story for you which I don't really want to do.
Awww shit!
Crusaders, you are taking the first train to YouRFuckedville! Pohpulation. You three!
And Rainbow ya mook! True love's kiss? Really? Have a reality check, this ain' t no damn fairy tale!
Things are coming together now.
8039996 Welp, the CMC can kiss their chances of getting parole goodbye.
Well....my heart’s broken. CMC you three are in way morr trouble than you thought you were.
CMC welcome to jail. You three better hope you don't drop the soap during your stay.
And now the consequences begin. Murder, harassment, assault, and terrorism are just a few of things I can list right now. There are some people who want to watch the world burn. Me, I just want CHS to burn. Looking forward to the next one. And thank god, True Love's kiss didn't work. What did you expect Rainbow, that this was a fairytale? Most fairytales are grim and dark. Disney just made them happy and colorful.
8040041 Thank you for the comment I know I almost cried too when I wrote this and had Icecreammac edit it for me. I didn't want to do that to Sunny yet it is necessary for the story line arc that I am setting up. I know right! Rainbow was thinking her magic could work when in the movies her magic is about flight not about energy like we see with Twilight and Rarity.
You fucking hypocrites! It's easy to say you love someone when that person dies! But what about standing by her side when she needed help? Or when she was beaten to the brink of death by a rapist, where was your fuking love!?
As in the words of the wise necromance Asutsuo Johan Faust: " Foolish girl. Mistaking the guilt you feel because of your sins for true love."
And even after the truth comes out why do I have the feeling those two will be in denial that their sisters are the culprits? Or even better, they will think someone is manipulating them to take the blame for Anon-a-Miss. Seriously how those two can say something stupid as "I don't know why she did it" in the first chapter, when the truth is right in front of their eyes!
Still, why do we need Eventide again? Or Summer Sunrise? Sunset is gone. Whatever plans you have for them no longer impacts Sunset. And I don't give a damn about Celestia, the princess, Chrysalis or anything else but the CMC and the CHS student body being punished.
8040599 Summer Sunrise plays a role that is important to this story and the sequel to it. Eventide's role will come out in the sequel I brought her into this story line arc so that I can have her here and ready to go when I do the sequel. Yes the cmc will be punished how greatly I am not sure as of yet there will also be payback for Sunset as well how dark I will make that I have not decided as of yet. You are also forgetting about one other character and that is Trixie. Go back to that chapter titled Trixie read it find what Sunset says to her just before she rights her letter to to Flash.
8040643 I don't care about Trixie too. She can have her petty and stupid revenge or whatever. And I am not going to read the sequel of this story, I am tired of this doppleganger BS. Sorry if I sound offensive, but the last chapter you posted really stroke a nerve with me... Not to mention I still think this story took too long to finally pay off all the abuse Sunset went through. Once again I could care less about the dopplegangers. Actually I hope Summer dies too, I do not find her character interesting and so far she is just "bwahahahaha, I am an evil Sunset". Which I find to be stupid and a waste of time read about her petty schemes, while we could've seen this story going forward.
8040667 OK, You know for all your hate for either the characters or about this story in unto itself. I am very surprised that you have stuck to it till now.
8040692 I don't like to leave things unfinished, even reading stories. Even if I hate a story I want to see it's ending. Of course, there are stories/ fanfics that I gave up, stopped reading, dropped them, etc. Most of them got boring and I saw very little to gain from their conclusion. This story has at least one thing that is worth for me to keep me reading it: the CMC and the CHS student body receiving punishiment for their actions. Once that is over there is no reason for me to keep tracking it.
Also, my problem isn't the type of story you are writing. My problem is that I find the subplots you created, such as Starswirl's death or the tragedy that happened to Chrysalis' family, as well characters like Summer Sunrise and Eventide to be unnecessary for this kind of story. Not to mention that if their real importance will only be shown in sequels it's a proof that you could've not put them in the story at all and It would still work.
Not to mention you've awnsered one of my comments once that you wanted to read my opinion about the following chapters and that wasn't long ago.
Oh boy......
There will be hell to pay.
8040882 yes and the road to hell is often paid in the blood of those that are innocent
8040902 oh yeah.
Also, what is the point of having these different characters that have nothing to do with Sunset?
8040924 Which characters? I kinda lost track as to which ones I put into the story?
8040927 Eventide, Summer Sunrise, Chrysalis, the works.
8040358 the way it was described how Rainbow gathered her magic, instead of true loves kiss it could've been a twist where Sunset wakes up only to transform into her demon form because rainbow used negative emotions to summon her magic.
8040937 That will actually happen in another chapter. I can't say to much about it because I don't want to wreck the chapters ending for you.
You don't know what you have until its gone, And things will only get worse from here. Rainbow has lost the one she loved, and when she learns that it was her sister and her friends that are Anon a miss, she'll suffer another blow to her heart. But the one truly responsible for driving Sunset to suicide, the one who could've changed her mind but chose hurt her more was Rainbow herself.
She can curse Anon a miss all she wants, but deep down she knows who truly is responsible, and will have to live with that for the rest of her life.
I was slightly confuse at the beginning part, and was a little worried that the chapter will be about that but was pleasantly surprised when it started to pick up where that last chapter left off. I almost thought that Sunset was going to wake up after the kiss and start turning to her demon form, since Rainbow use negative emotions in her magic. I look forward to the next chapter and the reveal to the humane five who anon a miss is as well as the news of Sunset's death to everyone at CHS.
8040999 okay, I'm looking forward to it.
8041037 Cool I am looking forward to your thoughts on the next chapter as I get it out and ready for review.
8041053 I wonder how broken Rainbow will be after all this is set and done, and I shall try to wait patiently for the next chapter.
8041062 Thank you for waiting it will take me a few days to figure out how to write it I need to do some research to get it to hopefully work. I look forward to reading your comments when the next chapter comes out.
Scootaloo, watch your back. The ghost of Sunset maybe watching.
8041174 yep and she is one pissed off ghost too not to worry though the CMC get what they have coming to them. But now its off to work yay
Oh Rainbow Dash.
What to say about this pain that she's finally realizing she's going through?
What to say about the fact that not only is Dash feeling the Winter Cold but..far far more.
When one loses something that could be and they knew it if they just grasped it, sometimes it can feel hollow if it was something one had desired above so much else.
Sunset going through with it has made sure that they'll never be able to rest.
Twilights interactions are telling. She has shown that while she does respect this Celestia, she is not her teacher. She is not the woman she grew up with. She is not the one who has the right to say anything. Twilight is a ruling monarch under Celestia. She had the right to make the call with her. Sunset accepted it. Celestia really is blaming her though after both of them saved the day in some form?
The talk was interesting as well about the ahem, Priest shall we say? I'd rather not involve religion in these but it IS a point across that Twilight asked for advice.
OK- For Sunset again! I know it's all across the board. Really, it is.
I hope AJ doesn't get sick for what she did. It's freezing out there as it is. If there is ANY Wind Chill she could get really sick, Apple hardy or not. Her resilience is going to be very tested. I AM happy that she showed initiative and that she was capable of getting to her. While Dash has the leg power for it, she may not be used to swimming with weight in the cold. So hey, good on ya AJ for making Dash use her speed to get the truck instead. There is one thing though that makes me wonder- How in the world did they not get hurt sliding across Ice like that? She did shatter it further and she's being dragged behind a truck.
I really do hope that AJ didn't get it hard from this.
Though wouldn't be surprised if worse does happen.
Rainbow, your magic only works when you're in Harmony. When the need is great to right a wrong. While Time Travel is a thing, the only one who would have had a chance is Sunset.
The Kiss of life..a classic trope. I love that it didn't work, seriously. I'm glad you're sticking to your guns in this. It's so hard though when I am a Heavy class Shipper and you dangle this interesting Athlete pouncing Magical Field Scientist and vice versa at each other. "Go on, kiss! Oh, you did.. it didn't work! You ruined it!"
I wonder what CHS will do now that they know or soon will know, that shes gone?
8042054 Give me a few moments and I will post a revised re-edited edition of this chapter showing all that you have thus posted. I really dropped the ball on this one and i need to clean up my mistake. Let me re-post this chapter and I will show how all this comes together. I look forward to your comments on the newly updated version of this chapter. I know putting religion into anything is hard and it takes some doing but I felt that Twilight needed some one that you would except to see at a hospital. I have been to three in the past three years each time there was a priest at each one who offered council and guidance such as you found within this chapter.
I take it that it finally clicked in Dash and Aj's heads? That, maybe Sunset wasn't Anon-A-Miss at all? That, because of her bad rep as a manipulative b*tch, she was probably used as a scapegoat? That she was driven to suicide because of all of her "friends" actions?
Yeesh! I wonder how the rest of the girls are gonna feel when they get wind of this! ESPECIALLY Flutters and Pinkie since they found out about Sunset's innocence and didn't really do anything to clear her name or try to reconnect with her.
Dear God! How'll they all react when Anon-A-Miss is revealed!?
Please hurry with the next chapter
8044626 I am going as fast I can I need to wait till Icecreammac gets done with the editing then I need to check some things with him and see if something that I have in mind will work. After that I should if I am able to pull this off have it ready to go by tomorrow that is if and only if all goes well. Not to worry I will post the next chapter soon.
8044626 as per your request I have sent my new up coming chapter to another editor and thus it should be done in a few hours I hope. I will send it back to Iccreammac once I get Sadistic Fluttershy's version back. Once it is edited to the final piece it will be posted. I look forward to your comments on the up coming chapter.
Wow; ( and do you need help writing the funeral chapter ?
8046024 I might need help with that but I have not gotten to it yet. However if your offer is still good within a few days I will see if I can take you up on it. Right now I am waiting for Sadistic Fluttershy to get the next chapter back to me so I can get it to Icecreammac and see what he thinks of it. After that I will check with both of them and see what they think as to when I should do the funeral chapter.
8042079
Alright, so I have to say that really was a good way to show why they happened.
I was surprised you actually went back and changed it just on my word just because I had a few plot holes pointed it. I just wanted it to be a bit more believable. Though the change of clothes helps, I imagine she had a towel to dry off as much as she could? Otherwise she's going to want to stay in a warm spot as much as possible.
Taking off the clothes that got so cold of water all over them, also means you're taking the heat away.
She must have full blasted her cars heater if she was able to actually make it back outside.
Mmm so my my, I was happy with the changes!
Mmmm wish I had more thoughts to go on this, and you really didn't need to change a thing. I'm happy you went back to try and make it more fleshed out on what happened, as that is more to read.
8046086 Thank you I look forward to reading your comments on the upcoming next chapter once I get it posted and ready for review.
8046060 okay will do and let me know
8046132 yep I will I look so very much forward to working with you. What I will do is type it up hand it over to Icecreammac then to Sadistic Fluttershy and then to you for the final piece. uh if that is alright with you that is?
8046136 sounds good to me :)
8046154 cool and thanks I look forward to working with you on it.
8046161 likewise and your welcome
8046161 like wise I have a good inspiration speech from star trek