Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Oh, man I am so very sorry I didn't even see this comment till today for that I am very sorry. Rainbow left home because she couldn't handle being in a household where she felt that it was her fault with how Scootaloo turned out. She also left because of her mother's attitude towards Sunset in the 'Shopping' chapter. Rainbow is still blaming herself for what happened to Sunset thus she needs time and space.
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While I would love to answer this I feel if I do I would ruin the story and the ending for you. So thus I am not sure what to do.
Well hope Sunset can be saved, thou hope she ends Dumb Be;l's dad, seems he should die for coveirng up his sons's crimes i bet.
Was hopings he killed him, but if he crippled for life that good too.
Can't wait to see her get paypack on the others.
Uh oh, looks like someone is going out to the town for a day of fun. Hope to read more.
The last few chapters have been huge improvements. The pacing is much better again, the grammar and such has improved drastically, and there aren't any particularly stupid moments. The information is sorted much better without a million exposition dumps and letters to track, everyone's felt in character, and no random out of place subplots to kill the tone and tension. One thing in particular I liked is that demon Sunset (or whatever evil Sunset is called) still feels like Sunset instead of a random thing puppeting her.
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You technically already revealed it in an earlier comment where you said that part of the sequel will focus on Sunset's life after all this.
karmas finally asserting herself like the alpha bitch she is, nice to see.
Ohhhhhh..............fuck.
Man that boys never gonna be the same again (but you know what they say karma's a b****)😈 The girls had better lock their doors cause they have no idea what terror they have unleashed.
That I spend with the invasion of the Changelings? Will Twilight return to equestria?
8312216 Hey, glad you liked the chapter. Really motivating to hear things like this.
As for what to call evil Sunset, I vote for Sundown.
why is she running she's an undead its not like those bullets will do anything to her
This was cold and you know what they say: "Revenge is a dish best served cold". But still, media.giphy.com/media/b9aScKLxdv0Y0/giphy.gif
Well done, Sunset. Part 1 of your revenge is now complete. And now, we wait for Part 2. And we all know who's going to be next. And how will they react once they; who thought she is gone and will never see her again, SEE her again, alive and well? We will see soon but, until then; take it away, Callie and Marie:
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I did? I don't recall ever typing that up. well in case I did I should also state that the sequel will also focus on what Eventide does during the war as well and how Sunset is able to fit into the war as well as a certain siren.
I am thinking Rainbow is next on Sunset's hit list.
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There was a folded up piece of paper located in Dumbbell's wallet that piece of paper will come to light in the chapter after the next one which will show who she will target next.
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Hopefully Vinyl's name isn't on that paper.
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Vinyl and Octavia are not going to be the ones targeted by Sunset.
8312854 good
And I called it. Now Sunset is on the hunt and nobody is safe.
I think she's some kind of revenant.
I feel slightly conflicted on one hand jerk got what he deserved, but on the other Sunset’s really scaring me.....What the heck am I saying Sunset get your revenge you deserve it.
Arguably the most fun chapter to read. That was highly satisfying to read, by the gods.
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Wynonna Earp Reference? Cause if so, high five!
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Thank you, I hope that the next one will be just as satisfying to read as well. I am looking forward to reading your thoughts about the next chapter once I get it posted and ready for review.
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Probably Tirek who was mentioned WAYYYYY back when.
And so it begins.
Since dumb Dumb Dumb Bell is still alive, will he find out who the CMC were the oens who posted tose things wodner how he react, he help to kill a inncoent person and now facing prison time wheneh gets out of the hospital...Can't wait for the next target to fall, who will it be?
*Chuckles lightly*
Oh, this is going to be good. Of course, Dumbell was just the warm up. Sunset is like Willy Wonka; each victim of her revenge is a candy bar and hidden amongst those candy bars are golden tickets; the actual targets.
I have to say, this story far surpassed any expectations i initially had.
Despite the contrivances and irrational character moments that forced most of the conflict, i found myself very engaged with the story and Sunsets struggle.
And now after Dumbasses satifying mutilation i'm very much look forward to seeing who's in next for Sunsets revenge.
As well as to find out just what that Demon Heart turned her into and how Eventide fits into all this.
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Thank you, I look forward to your thoughts about the next chapter as it will reveal what happened to Dumbbell the chapter after the next one will show who Sunset targets next.
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Ok
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We'll you nailed the crazy part
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I do not see what is particularly lady like about allowing your sister to be bullied in front of your eyes
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And I would have to agree with you, however, Rarity was in a very refined very high-class society well to do restaurant and didn't want to make a scene thus she let her own pride and her own selfish mannerisms get in the way of her personal responsibility. There have been many times on the TV show where Rarity has placed herself ahead of her sisters' feelings and needs. I tried to show this in this chapter.
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Yeah, that makes sense
Rarity does have a selfish side like that
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Did I do something wrong with this chapter? I felt that if Sunset was to be adopted by the Cakes and if they had kids then yes Sunset would be the big sister.
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Because prison would be a waste of time.
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just because she is back from the grave doesn't mean that bullets can't still hurt her. I have not decided yet if human weapons will affect her or not I will think about this and see how it might fit into the story.
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Oh I'm sure that was just the opening act.
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She is also running because she doesn't want to go back to jail and also doesn't want to deal with jade and the cops just yet there are other bigger fish in the lake that she wants and she will go after them with all due haste if that means she needs to avoid a confrontation with Jade and the police she will do it in order to get what she wants which is no less than Anon-a-Miss whom Sunset does not know is actually three people instead of one single person. But she will discover this soon very soon.
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when i think undead i think of beings with above average strength so she could have either knocked them out or killed them and she would have been able to finish her torture
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She also doesn't know she has that type strength yet I will show her finding out about her abilities in the chapter after the next one which will show Dumbbells fate.
Revenge is sweet, I wonder who sunset's next target is? The rainbooms more so Rainbow Dash killed Sunset, and now she will seek vengeance. Will Sunset encounter Rainbow's Mom by any chance? If so I can't wait to see the look on her face when She sees Sunset, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Cutie mark crusaders you better watch out.
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I am not sure if Sunset should encounter Rainbows mother or not I don't know if that would work for the story or not. I'll run it by Icecreammac and see what he thinks of it. As for the CMC they don't know that Sunset is back....yet.
so... does Canterlot only have like 5 cops?
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No there are about two to three hundred cops but I can't do an entire chapter showing and describing all of them as that would take too much time and far too much research. So there should be about five maybe six total in this story. I think.
OOOOOOOOOH!