AAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE JACK YOU FILTHY NO GOOD INBRED BITCH!!

Please please PLEASE Sunset throws this into Apple Jack face!

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wow, I wasn't expecting that type of comment seeing as how after I disgusted the mater with Icecreammac it made sense that Applejack would see things as her character does in this chapter. I really do look forward to your thoughts on the next chapter once it comes out.

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Well thanks to Apple Jack Sunset became a bully fully, and made Fluttershy the main target, not that I blame her, and yes...Saddly Fluttershy fumbled the ball big time and was a coward.

You know it's so ironic, it thanks to Apple jack Sunset lost hope and trust in them, and it was int he end thanks to Apple Bloom who started Anon A Miss that lead to Sunset's death.

In the end the apple Clan ruined and murdered Sunset's life.
I love to see Granny Smith reaction to that video, she be so ashamed and disgusted with ehr othr granddaughter...a proper punishment for Apple Jack.

Whoa......

holly shit!!

Keep going!!

"Then give her an ultimatum," Applejack said grimly. The digital Fluttershy's head snapped to look at Applejack in disbelief. "Ah'm sorry, Fluttershy," she continued softly, "but sometimes, it's just not worth it to be friends with someone."

As you very clearly demonstrate. Jesus 'Unicycle Riding' Christ, Applejack. What the hell is your problem?

Kindness followed Honestys advice, and Redemption Fell. Now we see why she was so used, instead of heartful in he endeavor. Being rejected by Kindness would break many hearts. Honesty thought it for the best, but her experience was not what was needed. Redemption has become Fury at long last.

Though Laughter has little to laugh about now, Kindness feels cruel. Though spared their physical forms momentarily, Fury cared little if they would or would not fall.

Mmm I really am surprised that she spared them, but I suppose it's not too hard. They were friends, and though it's not Rainbow Dash sin, it is still painful to know they fell away and were swayed.

Applebloom and Applejack, their fates are up in the air. What will happen when the two get to reunite once more?

I believe I'll keep to using the scenes of using the elements as far as their bearers. Redemption was once Sunset Shimmer after all, but this has ruined her chances to claim it.

For now, I'll be looking forward to the next part, and hope you two are well. For up and coming is the desire of hearts, and hope is still in demand.

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Thank you for the comment I look very much forward to what you will think of the next chapter I hope you will enjoy it. And you are right due to Applejacks choice Sunset went nuts targeting everyone including Fluttershy.

Least Sunset didn’t kill Fluttershy or Pinkie.

When Sunset gave Shy the camera and when the video played and the details were spilled. I started to think about who’s fault it was. AJ’s or Shys?

To be honest. I’m leaning towards Applejack. She’s the one who told Fluttershy to break ties with Sunset. Even though it’s partially Fluttershys fault for not taking it upon herself to make her own decision rather than have Applejack make the decision for her.

In the end, BOTH are at fault here. Besides that, all the other girls are also at fault for leaving Sunset to bite the dust.

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Yes, you are right and I do plan on showing this before I send one of the two adult principals to Equestria I look forward to reading your thoughts on the next chapter.

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Looking forward to what you will think of the next chapter once it comes out and is ready for review.

"We both know she won't tell me nothin'!" Applejack snapped. "It has to be you. She always spends her time with you. You're closest to her. If she's gonna open up to anyone, it's gonna be you. Go talk to her, Fluttershy."

Applejack, you'd better not be planning what I think your planning...

"Then give her an ultimatum," Applejack said grimly. The digital Fluttershy's head snapped to look at Applejack in disbelief. "Ah'm sorry, Fluttershy," she continued softly, "but sometimes, it's just not worth it to be friends with someone."

God-bucking-dammit Applejack! I'm gonna take your lasso and use it to strangle that thick-headed of yours!!!

The screen abruptly went black as the video ended, and Fluttershy shook violently as Pinkie held her. “It was me," she said quietly, her tears once more threatening to fall. "She turned on us because of me.” Fluttershy began to hyperventilate, her eyes widening in fear and anger as her mind raced. It all made sense, now: Sunset's sudden hostility, her abrupt hatred of friendship, and even her targeting of Fluttershy more than of anyone else. It was all because she saw that conversation and Fluttershy's betrayal. "How can I be so stupid!?" she thought angrily. "I lost a good friend because I just couldn't stick up for myself!"

Hate to admit it Flutters, but you're absolutely right on that one......don't worry though, I'm gonna make you more assertive in my story!

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Can't wait to see it!

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ooh, your doing an Anon-a-Miss story too can't wait to read it and to add it to my collection of stories!

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Uh, I didn't say that I was gonna be doing an Anon a Miss story bro. What I meant was that I was gonna make Fluttershy more assertive to some degree in my Guardians of Harmony story. Sorry for the slight misunderstanding.

Still, now that you've brought that up, I am thinking about writing a story involving My Little Pony Season 2 Episode 23, 'Ponyville Confidential' The own where the CMC wrote all those stories about everypony in Ponyville. I'm gonna tell you right now man, that was one lf my two most least favorite shows in MLP, besides Mare Do Well. I do not believe for a minute that those sweet little fillies would even think about embarrassing everypony, including there sisters, without some good reason behind it. Which is why, in some part of my series, I'll be writing my own version about how that episode should've gone. I look forward to see what you think of it when I get there.

I might also add another story about them similar to Anon A Miss about how they to through the same thing over again, only it'll seem like they did it on purpose, even though they really didn't. If you really want to see me write an Anon A Miss story, I'll try to get it out there, but we'll have to see how things go in my series first.

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Ok, cool sorry for the misunderstanding. Looking forward to reading your work once you have it posted I am sure that it will be a rather interesting read once it is ready for review.

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That's okay. Can't wait to see what you think when I get to it!

Oh gosh damn this just pulls me right in.... now I really regret not being able to read this till now lols

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You could not have said it better my friend...now it all makes sense as to why AJ accused Sunset first. She was trying to find some reason to not want anything to do with Sunset, probably because she still didn't trust her even after all of this time. Applejack used Fluttershy, the meekest and most timid of her friends, along with her lack of standing up for herself, to get Sunset to open up about her past, unaware that Sunset was listening in the whole time. When Sunset found out, she realized that she was never really trusted or seen as a friend by them, and that all she did was for nothing.

If it wasn't for Applejack using Fluttershy like that and acting like a bully, Sunset would've never heard that conversation and never would've lost hope in finally finding a family...and if Fluttershy was more assertive, Sunset would've had at least one friend who really trusted her and cared for her. It's too late to right their wrongs now, they will both pay for what they did, Applejack mainly...she and her family. As for Fluttershy...well, she'll live with this guilt for the rest of her life, hopefully using this experience as a lesson stand up for herself more and to other people, even her friends, instead of worrying what they may do to her if she did.