Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Vinyl to the rescue...again!
7854840 has she rescued someone else before? I am a bit confused if she has or has not within this story arc. Oh thank you for the comment I really liked it by the way. I look forward to reading more of your comments in the future.
Hmm is that last girl VInyl Scratch ? :) Man Sunset is in for some troubles...
7854991 Yes it was VInyl Scratch. Thank you for the comment I should have another chapter up in few days. I look forward to reading more comments from you.
7854843 Rainbow Rocks
7855055 Oh, yes of course I completely forgot about that.
Great work!
7855305 Thank you so much for the lovely comment the next few chapters all take place within the same day and before Sunset gets to school. I couldn't fit it all into one chapter so I broke it up into several. I look forward to reading more wonderful comments as each chapter comes out. Again thank you for the comment I look forward to your continued reading and commenting on this story.
7855329 Anytime!
Dark Rating for this story has been upgraded from 2 to 7.
Fluttershy being religious is a bit of a surprise for me. Not many depict the EQG girls as such. It was like, 'Wait, what? She's doing it? Wow! I am honestly amazed.' I can understand AJ being she IS traditional and most families that are tend to have a deep religious core, especially once it comes to family. Though the more I look at it, the more I can see it very much fitting.
Now however, Fluttershy has discovered the truth. This would have put it back to a 1 rating, but then we got to school.
Possible Injuries- Concussion, broken arm, dislocated arm. Bruised ribs. Broken teeth.
The reason why it's gone up to a 7, is because of the sheer fact that not only did they injure her and knocked her out, but that she could be in serious medical need.
Hoops, Score and Dumbbell no matter their cause has given fuel for any of the authority on staff to make their time at CHS terrible. Then, we also have the fact that Dash could end up going crazy on the three. The girls may have been separated, but that doesn't mean Fluttershy isn't important to them. I have to wonder what Pinkie will say in fact when she gets to school? Will she ignore what was said or will she be filled with guilt and shame that she wasn't there?
Tis an unknown factor, but with the Proof Fluttershy has, no matter what happens- Sunset Shimmer will not receive aid in time, that we know.
I'm going to after realizing this, give it an 8 Dark Rating.
Darkness falls quickly upon those in the light, when they forget why they had the light in the first place.
7856734 It doesn't matter. It is gonna be very dark. Considering that the first chapter already indicated to us that Sunset is dead.
7856809
Yes, it is going to be very dark. I'm not ignoring the prologue. I'm saying, this is what it looks like to me as we go chapter by chapter in the past of what happened for the prologue. We're climbing the dark mountain to see how it got to that dark. Say the prologue didn't show up until we were past chapter 20?
Would you have been expecting it to be so dark?
7856841 To me, it would be dark but not as dark as it's going to get.
While I am proud that one of Humane Five has found the truth, I am getting a little tired that the first one to find out is Fluttershy again. I mean I know it's in her character to not be jumping straight to conclusions and being angry at someone out of the blue like RD and AJ but, let someone else of humane five find the truth first before the rest of a change. I'm just saying.
Been mostly silently reading since the prologue, but one thing that's ticking me off is that this story has basically become escalation for the sake of escalation, with the only foreseeable goal being it being dark.
Characters suddenly going "lmao let's kill someone" literally for the reason that they're evil. Not taking into account all the side stories, I mostly feel like this is a bunch of stories stringed together that coincidentally happens at the same time, rather than an Anon-a-Miss story. We do know the end of it, but really, this could easily have been twice smaller and still keep the building up, which is thrown from intrigues to intrigues whose purpose is rather vague , structurally speaking..
All in all it hasn't been a bad read, but my interest slowly died as it became , like a comment once stated, just a pile of abuses for the sake of it being dark.
Need a bit more than that to keep reading a story so long and dragging out, but hey, that's just me there. XD
Wish you the best for your story, and thanks for the read till now.
7856973 I thank you for your comment I know that it is a bit long for the story however there are events in this story that I feel need their own chapter. I can't fit everything into one single chapter. I am sorry to see you go though and I fully understand too. I hope you have enjoyed the story so far and look forward to reading any other comments that you might have if you chose to stay with the story. Again I thank you for the comment hope you have nice day filled with laughter and happy smiles.
7856905 I didn't realize that Fluttershy is always the one to find the truth of Sunset being innocent had I have known this before I would have changed the character to someone else. Although I am not sure as to who but I do know it would not have been Rainbow. Any how I fully understand your concern with Fluttershy being the one to find the truth. I am not sure what I am going to do for the part when the truth comes out for the rest of the main five or who will tell them yet. I thank you very much for the comment and hope that you have a wonderful day.
7856905 I thank you for the comment I understand your concern about this I was not aware that Fluttershy's character is always used like this. I thought she had been the one to find the truth about Sunset only once maybe twice in the fan fiction on this site. Any how I again thank you for the comment and look forward to reading more from you. I understand fully that this story is getting a bit long I wanted to show more to Sunsets character and there are events in the story that i can't put into more than one chapter. Believe me I wish I could fit it all into one chapter yet that would have made this into a 800 page story where as of now it is only 100 - 120 on google docs. I hope you have a wonderful day and I again thank you for your comment.
7856809 Uh what makes you think Sunset Shimmer is dead? Remember the Heart Crystal in the chapter 'Secrets about Sunset' I have yet to explain what that does or even is and why Sunset has it. That will be dealt with in two chapters I need to get back to Gilda and Summer Sunrise and show why Summer Sunrise is so strong then I will show Sunset asking for help from Twilight and her explaining what the Crystal Heart is that she has from the chapter 'secrets about Sunset'
The seeds are almost planted. Surely, we hope Sunset is prepared for what's about to next when she arrives at school.
Great job as always!
7857297 Thank you I needed that after the last few comments that I got on this story. It has made me feel so much better about this to know that there are some that still enjoy this story. I like your comment a lot again I very much and fully heartedly say thank you.
7858435 Once I get back to the six weeks later chapter and repost it so it shows where it falls into the story line I will show what happens after that chapter just because Sunset dies doesn't mean that is the end of the story. as is shown by the picture on the story cover page.
7858839 Thank you so very much! That really made my day all the much better I really needed to hear someone say they really liked this story so yes thank you thank you thank you thank you.
You'll find out eventually... but with the tags on this fic, I'm willing to bet it'll be too late before it happens.
... And now I want them dead too. You punch Fluttershy, you're gonna have to deal with me. And a friend of mine who won't take this very well...
I still think Sunset needs a hug.
7980483
Yeah, at this point I'm surprised when I meet someone I don't want dead. Can we just send them all to tartarus and let Faust sort them out?