Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Oh my. Chrysalis going to war? This isn't going to go well for either of them.
War can be darker than many others, but this is showing that her daughter meant more than her friend. Though she doesn't believe her, which does make things harder for her.
Argh, though really, a unique healing pony, dead. This is going to make things even tougher really, as having that in plain view could cause some very rough 'riots' about using it appropriately.
Mmmm things are starting and I can't wait!
7801419 Thank you for the most wonderful comment I look forward to reading more of your comments when the next chapter is up and ready for viewing.
this fic... what the hell is it even
i mean i understand the sunset pony sunset human angle you got goin on
but wtf is with the Chrysalis thing ?
we know sunset is dead or at least one of them
but how the hell does Crissy fit in to this? did she kill Sunset cuz if she did holy shit where did that even come from
there is far to much going on here and not enough interconectedness (not a word but it works) for the story to be coherent
really it made me not care at all in the slightest about the pony side of the fic
like at all
negative fucks given
how ever despite how jumbled it is the parts with pony sunset are good
7804322 OK, first to answer your question. Yes Chrysalis did kill Celestia's daughter whom was Sunset Shimmer. The chapters that have Celestia meeting with Chrysalis that was supposed to show Celestia's past. There will be much more to Sunset Shimmers past shown in the sequel to this story I wanted to show who Summer Sunrise is in this one then in the second one show Sunset Shimmer reveling more of her broken past in the second one. Second I have left clues through out the entire story as to what both Sunset Shimmer and Summer Sunrise are and how they are contented to Chrysalis. If however you want me to PM you the full tell everything Answer I will but I must ask that if you choose to go that route you will not display it on the comments section. I don't want it spoiled for those that have not read the story as of yet.
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Good writers don't have disconnected plots in the same book unless they plan on connecting them, either later in the work or thematically. So far the themes for the Chrysalis chapters seem to line up with the Sunset stories.