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Oh shit!!! Twilight run!!!
Keep going! This is getting REALLY good!
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Thank you but I am going to have to do a bit of slower chapter first as I need to touch bass about Jade and the two girls she has in the back of her squad car. Besides if I don't do it now then what happens to Jade might not make much sense so I look forward to reading your thoughts about it once I get the next chapter out. Hope you have a wonderful night.
8755317
You too!
What did you expect Rarity? It's not like anybody took the time to teach where, let alone tell her what a phone is
I really hope it doesn't come to that. Sunset's had enough hayseed getting thrown on her as it is.
Oh buck! It's the Magical Star vs the Fallen Sun! Till next time!
Wonderfully written chapters, always!
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Thank you so much! I look very much forward to what you will think of the next chapter once it is up and ready for review.
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I'll be waitin' like always partner!
By the way, just in case you were wondering why I haven't gotten my next chapter up yet, my computer crashed a little more than a week ago and I have to go get it fixed. So until then, I'm writing on another computer provided by my high school. I posted a blog about that a few days ago in case you haven't seen it, so I though I'd let you know about the long delay.
So Generosity finds a dark truth and we see Loyalty is burning. Her health is in danger even now. The human five are going through ringer after ringer, and even Honesty is having difficulty.
So now we have further studies to contend with. Some of the darker past shows through, not only with Celestia, but with Mr. Cake.
We also learn how rough things were for Celestia to know just how heavy that is as well. It's surprising how far she's willing to go..and then she says it out loud. Goddaughter. She's doing this for family lost and she doesn't want to lose her. This has to be one very hard battle for the former mom and Principal.
Sonata is going to have one heck of a time recovering from being slammed into a car, cab or not. Really hoping she'll get to recover quickly enough that they can get her healed up soon. Tough Siren or no, she's dealing with a very furious Fury after all. It'll be hard to calm her down at all.
Twilight being a target is going to really shift the tone further, but I can't wait to see just what the girls do to try and save her, even though Sunset knows that she's trying to help.
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Thank you for the comment I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter I hope you will enjoy it as much as you have enjoyed this one.
It’s pretty depressing seeing Sunset lash out so hard even after she’s dead. I’m calling it now: one of the twins will be named after Sunset when they’re born.
gosh damn the internal pain that I feel as I watch what seems to be the inevitable conclusion... But I'm just too hooked to look away from a single chapter!
Well damn. The showdown between Sunset and Twilight has finally arrived.
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Thank you for the comment I look forward to your thoughts on the next chapter once it comes out and is ready for review.
I called it I called it I called it. Sunset life lesson number one never leave your opponents alone near the same place you have hostages. Still though its nice that the Crusaders and Dashie are finally out of there, and man I was not expecting Sonota popping out of nowhere now that is true love right there, I just hope Luna manages to drive away while Twilight tries to reason with Sunny ( sorry I just love calling them by their nicknames). Anyways great rescue chapter cant wait for the next one btw sorry for not commenting on the last one I couldn't figure out the right words to describe how I felt about how applejack acted towards fluttershy in that video, also Im glad Brushed Jade is fully healed and at least Pinkie and Shy got away ( for now at least).
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Thank you for your comment I look forward to reading your thoughts about the next chapter.
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you should have Mr Cake say this to Applebloom and Applejack
"you know Cup Cake knew your mother"
"she did?"
"yes and she told me that your mother would be ashamed of BOTH of you *to Applejack* you for abandoning a friend, my adopted daughter when she needed you the most *to Applebloom* and you for ruining someone's life just because you were jealous
*and depending if he knows this, he then turns to Twilight*
"and let's not forget about you, I saw that letter and I know what you did and in my opinion, you don't deserve the title of Princess of Friendship considering that you banished my adopted daughter after she helped you with the Dazzlings, was that not good enough for you to be convinced that she had changed"
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I'll go over this with the editor and see if there is a way to add it to the story I might have to wait till the sequel but I will most defiantly try to get this into the story thank you so much for the idea. I look forward to reading more comments from you as I add more chapters to this story.
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feel free to edit it a bit if you want to
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Thank you. and again thank you for the idea I do plan on using it in the story although I am not sure which chapter I'll be able to use it in but yes I do plan on using it.
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TBH it kind of sounds like something that would fit in the earlier chapters where Mr Cake mourns over his daughters death because he was furious at the mane five and Princess Celestia during the funeral. The line you wrote about him scoulding Applebloom and Applejack would have worked best for the trial scene especially since it would have been something he would have said to them after the trial has ended. Also the part where he scoulds Twilight would have worked best during the funeral chapter as he would have found out about the unfair banishment. I just feel it wouldnt work in the latest chapters since he's willing to give the girls a second chance in order to save his daughter so he pretty much puts his anger aside "for now". I hope I didnt sound critical or judgemental Im not that kind of person. What you wrote was pretty good and definitely sounds like something that would fit into the story
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you raise a good point
If Spike was with them. with comedy.