Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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So Sunset comes back to life. Will she be charged for Dumbbell's murder? or is it impossible since you can't charge a dead person for murder?
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I am not sure I think she will be charged but then again I am not really sure how that would work. It'll take time to do some research on the subject then from there I'll have to decide what I want to do with Sunsets character.
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Assault and Battery, which led to death, Kidnapping, I think there's more to it than that. Anyway, she's back from the dead. I wonder how the Rainbooms are going to confront this issue since they pretty much drove her to killing herself. This is not something an 'I'm sorry' can fix. Actions speaks louder than words and they, along with Twilight, have much to make up for.
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true I'll see if I can think of something that will work I look forward to your thoughts about the next chapter once it is ready for posting and review.
Finally!!
Also, fuck!! All these twists. And poor Twilight.
All I can hope for is that Sunset finally finds happiness in the end. Somehow.
Also will Fluttershy confront Apple Jack over how she helped turned Sunset into a bully/tyrant because she so stupid, selfish untrusting bitch!
also think Sunset has nothing to apologize for on what she did to the CMC, and the others they got what was coming to them.
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it took a lot to write 12 pages which is how long that chapter is. give or take a page or two. Which is why I took so much time off from writing. I look forward to your thoughts about the next chapter once it is ready for posting and review.
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Can’t wait!!
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Thanks for reminding me about Fluttershy and Applejack I almost forgot about that scene yes I will have Fluttershy confront Applejack about that just not at the hospital as I feel it should be done in a more private setting.
Jeez, this woman is a stubborn as an ox!
I said it many times before and I'll say it again, poor Sunset.
The creator of Elysium...nice.
Jeez, take a chill pill Twi!
Like you have any power over two goddesses Principle Celestia.
Oh SHIT!
As always awesomely written chapter! I'm happy to see that Sunset was finally saved from her darkness! Though...I was not expecting Sonata to be pregnant! If so...who's the father?
Also, I really really, really hope I get to see the confrontation between Applejack and Fluttershy! Applejack really needs a good hard buck to that stubborn head of her's and a nice hard Stare from Fluttershy for convincing her to turn Sunset back into a bully and a tyrant. I don't care if she had trust issues and was suspicious of her, that was totally not a cool or a smart move!
Maybe this will help EG Fluttershy be more assertive and finally stick up for herself for once, instead of worrying about what her friends think about the choices she makes, especially Applejack and Rainbow Dash. If not...
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Thank you so much for the comments I look so very much forward to what you will think of the next chapter and yes Applejack and Fluttershy will have it out about how they both treated Sunset. It just won't take place at the hospital as I feel such a conversation should be held in a more private setting.
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Yeah, it should. I will so be anticipating what how it will take place! Till' then, waiting as always!
YAY SUNNYS BACK TO NORMAL!!!!!!! Even though the stories far from over i'm glad she's no longer in control of the demons heart and no lives were lost ''for now ''. At least Mr Cake was off the hook good thing Jade was too overwhelmed by tonight's events to even consider pressing charges, plus its sweet that Sonata reconciled with her grandmother her sisters would be proud, also Sonata's pregnant ?! Once again I did not see that coming. Even though shes not angry anymore I have a feeling were gonna expect a looooooooooooooong talk between the main five "especially Dash and Applejack, the CMC, Twilight, and the pony Celestia.
Looks like Twilight's latest adventure into the human world is far from over but at least shes not alone this time. Cant wait to see what's next it was definitely worth the wait. BTW will we ever see what happened to the possessed Vinyl?
Well it seems that everything has worked out, I think? Now there's going to be another problem in Equestria as well.
So for now, I'm going to be watching the aftermath of the whole chaotic battle:
Sonata and Gilda are pregnant, hoping for Fluttershy confronts Applejack, CMC mentally scared & depressed for life, not sure about Pinkie & Rarity, Twilight & Sunset finding out their twins, Twilight going to confront her former teacher later on.
Lastly for Rainbow Dash, well. . . she gotten what she definitely deserves and maybe her soul perhaps is broken as well.
I just got one word for all of them: Karma.
Though I pretty sure it won't be over anyway, far from it.
Also I have to wonder since Sunset is alive again, what'll happen to her Rainboom friends? Either if she doesn't want to be friends anymore or they want to make up for everything? I'm hoping for the first option.
Guess I'll have to wait 'PATIENTLY' and see what happens next.
So..... does the CMC stay in Canterlot now because of this?
i... dont know how it went from annon a miss to this... damn
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Sorry, it took so long to get back to you. I liked your comment and it has given me a few thoughts for some chapters. I look forward to your thoughts on the next chapter once it is done and ready for posting and review.
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just the way my mind works at times. I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter once it is done and is ready for posting and review.
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Not sure yet but your words did give me a few thoughts towards creating a few chapters. I look forward to reading your thoughts about the next chapter once it is posted and ready for review.
Well, this felt kinda anticlimactic. The beats are all there, but they come way too quickly and all at once.
Megaera is introduced and bam! instantly reformed.
Bam! Sunset is instantly fixed.
Bam! Sonata has a baby again and someone who can go die in her stead.
And all of that in like half a page.
I really didn't think you'd do this. Saving Sunset like this. This is really a surprise for me. Especially since that this means that the girls will have to see if they really want to give in and forgive, or if the pain is too much.
I'm surprised how Sonata handled her dear grandmare as it were. Such a different way to see magic and more as well. Equestria having 15 well, I wonder what voice you'll give her? I mean, there's a lot of different things, but if she sounds like Shimmer well that means things are progressing in an entirely different way.
I really am going to be watching happily and thinking on what to see next. I'd review better, but I have to go through the story again. I really can't wait to see what you have in mind to show next chapter regardless!
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thank you for the wonderful comment I look forward to reading more from you once I get another chapter up and ready for review.
Character development! She used to be so by-the-book, though seeing impossible things happen right in front of you can definitely change your mind.
Fifteen sounds pretty powerful. Do I detect a final boss?
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I can't wait to see your comments about the next chapter once I get it ready for review that is. I look forward to reading your thoughts about the sequels to this story as well. Thank you so kindly for the comments.
Well, I've read all of it once again ^^.
But, I still don't understand many things, and I can't fully enjoy your story, so here's some questions.
First, if for any of my questions, you would need to answer them by spoiling, then it's fine with me (of course you'll hide for others).
I prefer being spoiled and appreciate the story rather than being lost about facts and having to go back (not that I mind reading again) reading specific chapters.
- How Twilight is Princess Celestia daughter? If by blood does she has anything to do about one of the pods? When did she was born?
This wraps my head since a long time and as I understood the origin of Sunset (while there is still some shadows about who created her - Chrysalis ?-), Twilight, her parents, Crystalis and all of this part of the story is still hard to keep up with for me...
- In "The Truth Is Revealed", during the expulsion of the CMC :
"[... just as Applejack snapped, “Apple Bloom, Y'all are sorely asking for--”
“Applejack,” Principal Celestia bitterly stated while Twilight quietly stood behind Applejack, “you had better not finish that sentence, because if you hurt your sister while in my presence, you, too, will find your butt out of my school faster than you can say, ‘Next of kin.’ Do I make myself clear?”...]"
Applejack was going to say : "... asking for...".
For... for what? Forgiveness?
What is the word that made Principal Celestia upset?
And when she said "... if you hurt your sister while in my presence...", did she mean hurting physically or by her choice of words?
Also (just my opinion), you seem to make Applejack quite the bad character after everything that happened. This, plus the fact she hit? gave a slap to? Applebloom (not that this is a good thing) and how BigMac and Granny are acting towards AJ for this, you wanted to mean that it wasn't her place to do so or to anyone at all?
- What about Octavia and Vinyl?
Thanks again :)