Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Good chapter. Things are starting to calm down........but that's not saying much.
Still, keep going!
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Thank you I plan on doing another part to this chapter in a few weeks.
As much as the Rainbooms are right for letting Sunset go they really should make peace with her. True they hurt her just as bad as she did but in technicality the entire school did worse. What we really need to see is how CHS is handling this mess and how it can affect them and maybe Crystal Prep during the friendship games when Sci Twi goes magic crazy and the Rainbooms can't stop it.
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I was actually going to show that in the sequel as this one was supposed to show Sunset leaving the city and show the start of the war that is going on in Equestria. Don't worry I will show this but in the sequel. I look forward to your thoughts on it once it gets posted I have another story that I am currently working on right now I hope you will enjoy it once it comes out and is ready for review.
I haven’t heard wind of the newest chapter up until now, but is Sonata the Cakes’ newest daughter or daughter-in-law?
Oh Trixie...you're gonna make me cry....
Nice to see that things are finally starting to settle down. I'm really eager to see how the rest of the school and the Rainbooms are doing...hopefully things will start to simmer down with them as well. I'll have to wait and see....
Well...nice to see that things are finally starting to settle down.
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Soon to be daughter in law but in Sunset Shimmer's eyes, the Cakes are also Sonata's parents as she doesn't want her to be alone any more Sunset has seen how Adigo and Aria have treated Sonata and wants to make sure that Sonata is NEVER treated like that again. So making sure that Sonata knows she has a family means everything to Sunset.
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Like I said in an earlier comment I plan on showing that in the sequel this one is supposed to show the start of the war that has been mentioned throughout this story and to show Why Sunset leaves the school and her former friends.
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I see, thanks for the update.
Nice to see ol Trixie again , I kinda pictured her being traumatized for a while after that little torture session with the possessed Sunset but Im glad she and Sunny are starting to get along despite the conflict with Anon a Miss and that Sunny will have another member of the family. Guess Sunny really is on board about moving but then again I cant blame her, even though it will be hard it would be a great way for her to get over the Anon a Miss and Demons heart drama. I hope the Rainbooms and CMC make amends with her before she goes so she at least has closure, however It might be a little difficult for Applejack and Dash. Cant wait for the next chapter.
p.s. sorry I forgot to comment on the last chapter. I liked it as well, especially the reunion scene with gilda and her grandfather I hope she and Summer will finally be able to get away from the Sombra conflict.
So Sunset was dead and buried but now back to life. How will this be handled? What about documents?
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no one other than the Cakes, Celestia, the Rainbooms, Brushed Jade and Luna know that Sunset is alive. I plan on showing how this is handled in the sequel as this story was meant to show how Sunset got her fresh start and the war that starts in Equestria.
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I suppose her coming to life will not change the Crusaders' fate. The wounds of Anon-A-Miss run deep. The Rainbooms are shattered too.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment I look forward to reading your thoughts on the upcoming chapters and hope to hear from you again
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I know, it was a joke.
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oh, then I am sorry for my rude comment to you I didn't realize that you were joking for that I do apologize to you.
Thanks to Forgotten Friendship, I've noticed people are enjoying the fact that Trixie came around from what she did during the Battle of the Bands. She has shown she's not that bad, though she didn't do too much in the other movies. Seeing her here with a little more 'This isn't worth it after all' to what happened with Sunset is good too.
I didn't expect it to be, 'My kin beat me, so you can beat me to.' type of relationship. Now though that Trixie has seen well, that she wants to live, I suppose her will to get away from her family is finally showing through. I'm hopeful that she is able to enjoy living beside the Cakes and that Ponyville does give her a very much needed break.
I do like that Trixie wanted to show she IS more than just some loudmouth teen, that she's just awhirl of all the troubles that have happened and she's putting a stand to it.
Also, I can't help but see Mrs. Cake as a Mama Bear right now. Heart over Logic, good over 'Right'. If not for the trouble they had to go through or that Trixie has family out in Ponyville, I was looking at it like- "I am Adopting Her Too. Just Try To Stop Me!" moment for Mrs. Cake. XD
Either way, an interesting side to Trixie you are exploring and I hope it shows through in other ways.
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I have another chapter with Trixie, Sonata, and Sunset that I am currently working on and should I hope have it ready for editing in a few days after that I hope to have it posted within the end of next week. I look forward to your thoughts on it once it comes out and is ready for review.
Ok, caught up, and heres my comment.
Its been a wild ride through these 109 chapters, and Im glad Sunset and Sonata are getting a happy ending. Cant wait to see the wedding. Sorry Dash, as much as I love you and Sunset together, ya broke Sunset's heart. Wonder if despite having none of Sunset's DNA if the baby will look like her parents?
And good on Trixie and Sunset to bury the hatchet. EeYup... alls well that ends well.....
BUT WHAT ABOUT MONSTER VYNIL AND OCTAVIA???
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Don't worry I will come back to Viynl and Octavia at the end of the story doing so will allow me to write the sequel to this story.
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Aaaah ok hehe.
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Like Mrs. Weasley: "Not my adopted daughter's new friend, you bitch!"
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I see...