Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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The Crusaders have no right to complain. They are lucky not be locked up. Separation is the best and a new town for each will prevent any retaliation from angry students. Better to be safe than be shanked in the bathroom or hallway.
Honestly, this is for the best. I've read many an Anon-A-Miss fic where the CMC are split up because their families think they're a toxic influence on each other. And honestly, I can see their point. They say they're sorry now, but what's stopping them from doing this again in the future, from letting their emotions get the better of them and lashing out at someone?
This will truly hammer in just how badly they messed up. Not only do they have to live with the guilt of being partially responsible for Sunset's death, but they have to live with the fact that this whole incident destroyed their friendship, as well as damaged their relationships with their families.
Maybe now they'll actually think before they act. Maybe this will truly teach them that actions have consequences, and they don't always affect just you.
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Sur they got some of the point as Lighting Dust tried to rush them and hearing the threats and insults thrown at them. Sure they anxious to get out of there.
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But it's not absolute. I mean, like Celestia said there are a lot of angry students. They might have relatives in those places anyway. Also, I doubt the CMC will be welcomed in Sugarcube Corner, one of their fave hangouts. And the Cakes would probably tell other store owners as well about what happened. I know it may not be allowed but you know gossip and such. This would also be bad for their families' reputations. I mean, adults will say "How come they did not teach their kids better?" and all that. So, they have to suffer the consequences. They pushed Sunset toward isolation and finally to kill herself.
Question to the writer: is Dumbbell gonna be killed by the newly revived Sunset?
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Yeah thou if they live long enough to realize that.
Anyone think that Sunset's going to come back to life.
If any of you do, tell me if you think she'll be the same Sunset as before, or something else.
Great work, as usual!
That
was
satisfying.
Mmmmmm so satisfying.~
about damn time these psycos got what they deserve!
im tired of them in other stories only getting detention. they should be expelled!
Haha!
Awww, what the matter CUNTerlot High WonderCOCKS!?
Cant't accept it (?)
WELL TOO BAD BUDDY BOYS!
YOU'RE IN KARMATOWN! POPULATION?
YOU MOTHERFUCKERS!!! SO SUCK ON THAT!
Sweet justice. The crusades are over for those three. Hopefully now those three aren't allow to be together that they will make new and better friends in their new schools.
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She is alive. Here's the chapter to prove it.
And so, the crusaders don't go to jail but, they get expelled and are sent far away to separate parts of the country. Eh, fair enough.
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It seems that I had missed a chapter, thank you. Allow me to change my question: can Sunset be saved from the evil that binds her, or will she have to be put down.
Time for the Crusaders to be put on suicide watch. They might try a group suicide just to stay together.
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I would love to answer your question about Sunset and Dumbbell. However, if I do I it will ruin the chapter for everyone else and I also don't want to ruin it for you as well.
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That is enuf to let me imagine his fate.
good job on this.
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Thank you, I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter once it is ready for review
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me too☮
also I should point out if they were found guilty, they would have been sent to juvenile hall, they're too young to go to prison
also I'm happy with this punishment, you three made your bed, now lie in it
also I just remembered The Perfect Pear, I just imagined Mrs. Cake saying this to Applebloom "I knew your mother and I know she would have been ashamed of your sister for abandoning her friend as well as you for what you've done, you and your friends are banned from Sugarcube Corner for life, you come here again and I will call the police, you can also tell Pinkie she's fired, we have no need for someone who betrays her friends, you can also tell your sister she and her friends are banned for life as well, now get out and don't come here again"
the punishment still feels bland, not enough, they did break the law in the end, and they walked away with no fine, no mark on there criminal record because it well vanish when they turn eighteen, one of the worst cases and results of cyber bullying, and they are getting what some might feel is adequate but seems like a slap on the wrist.
Even though they messed up big time I feel sorry for the CMC and the humane five🤧 Btw couldn't they have just transfered the crusaders to Crystal prep? I mean I know it doesn't have a good rep but at least non of the students there know what happened and it is pretty far from CHS.
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While I am sure they could have been transferred to Crystal Prep High school it wouldn't have worked as that school is in the same city as Canterlot High school. The school in wich the cmc were in has too many students any one of which could easily found them and hurt them not to mention it would cost more to send them there whereas going to schools out of state wouldn't cost that much. Just a five hundred dollar bus ticket and presto you have your kid in a new state and new school. where even if someone does learn of what they did it is highly unlikely anyone would do anything about it. please don't feel too badly for the CMC I have something special planned for them.
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Yeah I guess that's true it wouldn't take long for someone to figure out they are hiding at there rival school. Anyways cant wait to see what happens next.
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I should have the next chapter done I hope by Friday and out within a few days after that looking forward to reading your thoughts on it once the new chapter is up and ready for review.
I'm really surprised that Twilight didn't tell them to go look at the grave again, but it's been long enough. Still though, now Sunrise and Sunset are together again. Things are going to be quite crazy from now on for them and through them.
I'm really surprised how the trial went as well as the fact that Chrysalis was a judge in this world. It was a bit spooky, though I can see how she could have worked well for it. Having so much control really did give her quite the hold on how things were.
Mmm I would have more to say, but I chewed through every chapter I've been missing to make sure I could catch up fully. I um, I really am going to be happy about what else could show.
Now, the fact she started to show off her new 'Demon Form' has been fun as well. The changes, rifts and showings is amazing as well. I do wonder what Adagio and Aria will do. Though Sonata having such a unique ability is going to be interesting too. Hmmm! I wonder what Adagio had for her own, or Aria? I mean, there had to be something that made the two unique.
I wonder what will happen with the Equestria Chrysalis now as well. Buried as she is, she's still in danger of losing all her army further from this after all.
Speaking of, Eventide will be difficult to show off anywhere at all.
Mmmm as for Principal Celestia- I wonder just how badly things are going to be, but honestly, none of the teachers will be very trusted as well considering that they didn't do anything either. Just one of them taking phones that check mystable would have been enough to make sure that there would have been interruption to Anon A Miss plan.
So they aren't blameless. Still, I guess it never occurred to them to do this. I mean, in this modern society with how schools are, losing their phones would be rough as well.
I do hope that the three do see just what they've done. Still, when they're 18- I wonder just how badly things will get? I mean, by then, no school system, no friends nearby. They're going to be crying a lot..and we haven't even gotten the Dark Chapter.
Just how terrible are things going to be, I wonder? This will be interesting to see, when our two 'Clones' do show up.
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Sorry, it took so long to get back to you about your comment. I have a chapter that is being edited by Icecreammac that will start to show how bad things are about to get I look forward to reading your thoughts on it once it is ready for review.
I look forward to seeing these new developments, will the Crusaders past come looking for them? After all, I've seen people quite literally go to Hell and back for revenge so what's a few miles? And I suspect very soon EVERYONE will learn what revenge and what a few simple actions can do.
There is a famous case of three girls being in a car accident, two of the girls died but the driver survived, she was texting while driving. The day began so simply; they all went to work that day (convenience store) but one of the girls told the others she was pregnant and her boyfriend who is the father refused to take responsibility. The girls took the rest of the day off, went to the mall, told off Baby Daddy, and even got a little tequila (the driver had none). There they were, on the road, singing to the radio, helping their friend, and then it goes off; the text message alert. She looked away for ten seconds to answer the text and those short seconds changed everything for a lot of people. The car swerved into the other lane and hit another car head on, an instant later another car failed to stop in time to avoid the accident and slammed into both vehicles. The first girl died instantly and the second died in agony on the way to the hospital. The driver fell into a coma and woke in the hospital hours later.
The next day Baby Daddy was on the news telling the world about the tragedy of losing his pregnant girlfriend and how he was so looking forward to being a father.
The driver's mother was blacklisted from the local convenience store.
When the driver's parents attempted to go the funeral of one of the girls her father said: "Get out, and if I ever see you again I'll kill you!" This was an old family friend.
Now, of course, more happened to the girl and those she loved but let's not forget there were two other vehicles in that crash.
The first car that the girls hit head on had three people; a mother, father, and a little boy who were driving home. The parents died instantly and the boy had to go into surgery for glass removal, he was raised by his paternal grandmother.
The second car carried a single person who died instantly as well.
All this was caused by just a single text and a few seconds.
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I don't think it will go that far but Sunset will have at least some sort of vengeance and justice but not as far as your story went though.
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I was merely demonstrating what a few words and time can do.
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oh, oops, didn't really realize that until you pointed it out to me.
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I actually have two questions regarding the story:
1: Is the cover art at all indicative of something thats gonna happen?
2: We already know she's gonna kill herself, but is this gonna be more a rollercoaster with hope spots and sympathetic characters or more of a endless pitfall into hopelessness and isolation for Sunset?
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To answer your above question: Yes the cover art is indicative of something that is going to happen.
To answer the above question: I tried not to go that route yet I do not know how successful I was in doing so. I'll have to leave that up to you to decide it is or is not a pitfall into hopelessness and isolation for Sunset. I did try to show that before Anon-a-Miss struck the five friends she had all thought of her as family and cared for her. I also tried to show that after the Anon-a-Miss incident happened her friends began to show both their feelings for Sunset and how Anon-a-Miss hurt not only Sunset but also the entire school as well.
If there are any other questions please let me know and I'll answer them as best as I can again hopefully without spoiling the story for you.