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Ok, NOW I'm terrified of what I think is to come next.
7879782 Thank you very much for the lovely comment I look forward to reading more comments from you once I get more chapters out.
7879782 I know what might happen, it's got something to do with the cops.
I Wish the CMC would at least feel guilty for this
7879880 Thank your so much for the wonderful comment I look forward to reading more comments as I get more chapters out.
7879960 Thank you for the wonderful comment I look forward to reading more comments as I get more chapters out.
7880194 keep up the good work
7880205 Thank you your comment means a lot to me I will work on the next chapter and I look forward to reading your comments on it.
Should have known it was cooking alcohol.
Well, this is going to make things dark indeed. We've jumped from Non Prologue 8 to a nice snappy 14.
Prologue is now a 40 on the dark rating when including all of this.
I'm somewhat surprised about you including that and skewing the time line further. While it does make things like Celestia being less 'Unable to Do anything' to 'Helps well'. It doesn't put a lot of good pressure on her pony self. Celestia of the EQ world is going to have to investigate further, though I'm surprised none of them asked further about her phone. This does mean that unless she has a computer access to, she's dramatically made it harder for anyone to blame her. The CMC don't realize that she's lost her phone.
This is likely how the school will find out that not only is Sunset innocent, but that she's being framed.
Rarity may not be expelled, but when she finds out Sunset is innocent, I wonder just what it will drive her to do? Pinkie didn't listen to her Pinkie Sense it seems. She's going to have a hard time with that too.
AJ who strives to be an honest one, oh we're going to have fun with her emotions alright.
Now though, we have our macguffin. A dangerous macguffin indeed. We don't know what will change or how it will change the story, but macguffins always do something in some form to it.
7880515 Thank you for the comment I look forward to reading more from you once I get another chapter up and ready for review.
I just hope the CMC pay for what they done to Sunset and the entire school. This has gone far enough for them anyways but I fear that the Web Of Chaos and Destruction is nearly ready to be set off and I can't wait for it to go off.
BTW: I think you made an small error in the author's note. Lucky enough, I fixed it for you.
7881255 Thank you so much for catching and fixing that for me I have thus copied and fixed the issue I look very forward to your thoughts on the next chapter once it is out and ready to go. I hope you have a wonderful day or night filled with much laughter and big happy smiles all day or night long.
7881806 You're welcome! :)
7881966 Oh, don't worry I will have the cmc pay for what they have done if you reread the prologue you'll see they are in jail for what they have done I am going to show how they got there and what led to them going there.
A very interesting chapter, but there is something that he does not reconcile if sunset is a daughter of princess celestia because then in chapter previous chrysalis he says that I kill the daughter of celestia.
Certainly already there is label of the prominent figures of equestria girls, for if it is interested in adding them
I leave you in order that you see it https://www.fimfiction.net/story/360399/even-the-angels-arent-innocent
Regards
Hm... this does seem like a logical and almost possible culprit to who caused Sunset to be framed.
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NAH!!!