Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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So, a bit of an update and next how Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie reacts. I wonder if blame will go around and Fluttershy lets out her repressed rage at everyone and everything.
8063384 Sorry it took so long to get this chapter to tell you the truth I am not sure how I am going to write for Fluttershy's behavior towards Rainbow in another chapter I need to show Twilight going home first to inform Princess Celestia of Sunsets death. Beyond that I am not sure what I will do with her character. But I do still look forward to your comments on further chapters.
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Have Fluttershy erupt in anger.
8063408 I do have planned one chapter each for each stage of grief for each of Sunsets five friends. I have planned to have Rainbow show anger and Fluttershy to show acceptance. But if you are talking about show anger towards Rainbow for what happened TO Sunset Shimmer then I think I will be able to show that.
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Fluttershy: "Now Sunset doesn't have to suffer anymore..."
Kinda like that?
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YeH i agree with chorme she needs to blow up on rainbow dash. And i meab epicly. The quiet ones when they finally snap THEY SNAP with the fury only a god of war would dare challenge and even then its iffy.
Also i cant wait to see how the school takes it.
8063430 yes and no she will give a reasons why she wasn't able to stop Sunset from leaving the animal shelter. I will try to make it as good as I can I hope you will enjoy the chapter once it comes out. I need to do a different chapter first which is the one that shows Twilight going to Princess Celestia and telling her about Sunsets death. Which in turn helps explain why the princess is at Sunsets funeral.
8063440 I will try to show her blowing up at Rainbow yet I am not entirely sure how to show that seeing as how I know very little about how she should act. I do plan on her reading Sunsets note that Rainbow has kept and her giving Twilight Sunsets letter that Sunset wrote in the animal shelter. I just hope everything I have planned makes at least a little sense. I look forward to your comments once I get another chapter out.
I don't remember Sunset dying. Which chapter was it?
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Add Rainbow's anger at herself
8063548 Last words it was in that chapter that Sunset dies
8063563 I thought I already showed that with the opening chapter which we are getting closer to re-posting to by the way.
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I meant for right after all this.
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well if you need help id be happy to help
i'm a shy guy so i know what its like to just say "fuck it!" and just start screaming at people because --insert camel back breaking reason here---
8063575 oh, Yes I will try to show Fluttershy being angry with Rainbow.
8063587 Ok I might take you up on that let me type of Twilights chapter and then I'll see what I can do for Fluttershy's chapter and thus I will hand it over to you for adding and hopefully to get more feeling added to it. It will take a couple of weeks to get to it though I need to get Twilights chapter done first in order to help explain why princess Celestia goes to Sunsets funereal
Poor Mr. Carrot and Mrs. Cup Cake. All those two wanted what was best for Sunset. She may have been adopted to them but, they still treated her like a true daughter. They should have pulled her out of that school when they had the chance. But, from what the cover art implies. I'm pretty sure they won't be mourning for too long.
8063626 No they won't be I have a few more chapters to do before all hell breaks out but yes Sunset is coming back with a vengeance that will only be quenched by blood.
Quote to the school
"You just earned yourself with a dance with the devil, boy
Or in this case boys and girls
8063663 And you sir just figured out what one of the upcoming chapters will be about and partly how Sunset comes back. can't wait to see what you think of that chapter once I get it done that is.
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Wait... you mean...
This is like Ghost Rider if that does happen!
8063794 Not quite but she does dance with her.....darker side and she does come back once she does all hell breaks loose. all I can say is that in the darkness is when we often find ourselves making the deals we hope will lead us to salvation but often these deals only lead us to more pain and misery. No this not ghost rider even though there will be a deal made it is not like that at all. It however going to get much darker so keep reading. Oh you might not want to read with the lights off.
Well shit. That's all I have to say about this.
And after reading the comments, Sunset is coming back after making a deal with the devil? If that happened to me, I would want Stanley Pines to help me con the devil. Cookies for you if you figure out what show I am referencing.
And if you have Sunset dance with her evil side under a pale moon light, I won't know whether to love you or hate. I'll figure that out once the chapter gets here.
8063991 She gets help from an axolotl. It writes itself!
Heavy.....that's all I have to say right now.
So Rainbow Dash is finally being loyal and still be there for her sister, too bad it came at the cost of the person she loved. From what I read in the comments i can probably guess that Sunset's demon side won't go down that easily, and will take over Sunset's body now that she is no longer in the picture. She will want revenge on those that betrayed her and the humane five, especially the cutie mark crusaders will bare witness to the further consequences of their actions. But this time the elements of harmony won't save them.
8063654 I forgot to mention this but, wow. From what I've seen of him in previous chapters, Carrot took it a lot better than I thought he would.
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sure take your time x3
8064504 That's because I have something planned for him but I don't know if what I have planned will work for him or not.
8063564 Will Sunset come back or is her fate sealed?
Now I can't help but think she's going to go Lina Inverse on us, Twilight.
Powerfully dangerous spells? Check!
Lost someone important to her? Check!
Wanted to make her push toward her true potential? Check!
Able to access her magic in this world? No Check!
Twilight still must feel some considerable pain from knowing that the people of this world just couldn't let well enough alone. They couldn't question, hypothesize or even guess that maybe her breaking down in front of them wasn't an act? That she just wanted to explain?
Really, this is really making it hard to see things in any light but dark, and I'm enjoying this fact.
Now we just need time to let the Demon Heart act, which I assume is going to take more than a few weeks considering the amount of time we have left until the prologue. It must be keeping her body preserved somehow after all.
If it isn't, well, we may have a minor lich style Pony who wants revenge, at least from what I've been able to tell.
Still, I really do hope Fluttershy shows how furious she is, though sometimes ones fury is turned inward because they were unable to see the cry of pain. They were unable to see the important thing that was right before them.
Celestia showing her I have to say it, Humane side with how deeply it really hit her shows through nicely as well. This is just another part of the mixing storm as far as I can tell though.
I look forward to more, and I can't wait to see how things go!
8065957 Yes Sunset comes back as the cover art shows however what comes back may not be the one they all knew and loved.
8066020 Thank you for your comment I look so much forward to reading more from you once I get another chapter up.
8066042 So that's what the cover art is suppose to represent. Now I get it.
I wonder that when/if Sunset comes back if it has to do with the vial that she was stabbed with.
8068264 Go back to the chapter titled "Meeting and the demons heart" Your answer lies within that chapter.
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I can see it. It will be interesting. I can't wait. Really looking forward to the end results from telling the school about Sunsets death. It will be most interesting.
8068473 Cool can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter once I get it done and ready for reviewing just so you know it takes place before the actual funeral for Sunset. And it should I hope help explain why Princess Celestia is in the human world.
8071699 Sunset shimmer cakes yeah i thought it was a little weird but it also makes sense seeing as they are parents in the tv show and seem to have good hearts too.
8068264 Don't worry, she will. Give or take another five chapters, my best guess.
8071741 Actually in my defense, Shimmercakes is one of my nicknames for her. Plus in a fic I'm collaborating with with a friend of mine, Sunset's boyfriend has a nickname for her, which is Shimmercakes.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/335253/equestria-girls-sunset-awakening
The link is here. Its not on my account, and unfortunately there is a ton of stuff I really want to get fixed in it but I can't fix it due to my collaborator being busy with college. Take a look if you want though. From my opinion, its somewhat good.
Even if you don't want to read it, the likes do help. In fact, if you could leave another like I'd really appreciate it.
This was... painful, to say the most.
You happy Crusaders? You got what you wanted didn't you? She's now out of your lives forever, isn't it just worth having her dead?