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Pretty good!
8112161 Thank you I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter which will be the funeral chapter.
8108234 not really the song it self I got the idea from watching the videos you'll find below:
There's an obvious lyric that fits with this quote
It's never too late to prove true loyalty, Rainbow but, when Sunset does come back, she'll obviously have nothing to do with you anymore. You, the other Humane Five and Twilight for that matter. And you need to be a strong woman and take it. I know it will be hard for them but, I hope Rainbow, the other Humane Five and Twilight are prepared to face it. Other than that, good chapter.
8112594 Thank you that means a lot to me to know that you liked the chapter I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter.
I so want to make 'fake quotes' here about what could be said, and who could say it. I'm happy you brought out the 'Demon Side' for Rainbow in the dream. Show that this is what a ruined harmony does. Seriously though, did love how you showed that Rainbow Treated Sunset as terribly as Sunset treated the 5 before, but then took it up a notch to show the broken heart.
Mmmm and of course we know that Kindness can't stop but try to help, even if she's angry and hurt. Her nature is that of the heart and it does show that she still cares for Rainbow. Furious, upset, but there is still depth of heart even then. They won't recover from this easily, but Rainbow will stick with Fluttershy truly from now on.
Wow, I just realized how badly any other bullies of Fluttershy who may show up will get it if Rainbow even hears a rumor.
If Rainbow has gained her passion for protection, Loyalty will be nigh unstoppable should she regain her magic. Rainbow after all as we saw in the show had what it took to go all the way to The Wonderbolts.
I wouldn't be surprised if in the future, she'd actually think of going after if not the army, The Reserves or National Guard. I don't think it'd take her away, though she'd have to do training. She'd fit well there considering how into athletics she is. Wouldn't be surprised if she even tried to drill her team to get better, from the weakest to herself in the end.
Fluttershy being the one to disarm any chance of argument by being the one to chat with Celestia was also a good move on hers, as Celestia likely does feel a slight amount of anger toward our athlete for her case in point on her god daughter.
Soleil mmm? I do enjoy the bit of touch and go with it as I believe that's the proper name to our Star? I'm just grasping at straws since I know we're the Sol System.
Mmmm, we're going to have quite the ride after the funeral.
Anyway, take care and see ya! Hope you and your editors have a good day and can't wait for the time skip!
8115047 the word Soleil is french for sun as in the sun that gives this planet life. We will have to wait to see what Princess Celestia does and what she really knows about Sunset in a later chapter. I do plan on showing who and how Sunset is connected to a certain princess with purple fur and a star cutie mark. I do hope you'll stick with it till then. Take care and may you always laugh and smile each and every day.
argh, Soleil, quand c'est dans sa propre langue sa fait tout de suite moins classe XD.
Anyway, good chapter, really want to know "Shimmer, the origines" (the sequel of "how to clone a bunch of celestia's futur student to hurt the sun princess" by Queen 'vengeance' Chrisalis).
8115235 Thank you for the comment I do plan on doing a side origins story about Summer Sunrise showing what actually happened to her. While I want to add some of her past into the sequel I feel that it would dilute what the sequel is supposed to be about which is the war that Chrysalis starts. I look forward to reading more comments from you as I produce more chapters.
8119616 lol yeah I thought so too when I actually read it. It was this website that drew my attention to it and it was amazon that I was able to buy it from. I still have a hard time seeing as to why it was even allowed to be produced seeing as how I have had doubts that the CMC or their sisters would have actually acted that way towards Sunset.
8119926 Yep. Everyone in it was so OOC it wasn't even funny. It was so horrible, I almost STOPPED giving my support to EG. It was that bad, it drove me over the line. From getting their respect in Rainbow Rocks leading to THIS!?
8121510 uh did you just skip seven chapters. Doing so will more than likely make it to were the story won't make sense now.
8121891 No, I was just responding to your comment. I haven't read that far into this.
8121893 oh ok cool. I know you don't like how I have treated some of the characters but I hope it will make sense towards the end of this story and make even more sense in the sequel.
8121895 Okay. Just thought I'd tell you, haven't gotten that far. Just went onto this page to respond to your comment.
8121898 Cool looking forward to what you will think of the last seven chapters.
8112724 I just want to know when is the next chapter coming up?
8132539 I turned over what i was able to read of werewolfhunters attempt at helping me with the fenural chapter to a co-worker that is really good at reading the mess that werewolfhunter sent me. I should I hope have it up by the end of the week I know it sucks that it has to take so long but there are some good things in the chapter that werewolfhunter sent me I just needed help telling the following.
who was talking within the chapter
were the narration began and ended
who was thinking and what they were thinking
and
who was doing what within the chapter.
Basically what I got was a bunch of notes that were all jammed together which made it hard to get the information that I needed for the chapter. Like I said I should I hope have it up within the end of the week.
8132546 God willing, take your time and don't force yourself.
8132669 would you like to see why I am calling the next chapter 'a mess'? I can send it over to you if you like.
8133099 well if you think the CMC need to die wait till I get to the trial keep in mind the prosecutor job is to put them behind bars WHILE the defense attorney is supposed to keep the out of jail. I am going to try to make it to where the defense attorney is not a likable character. Which sadly is the case with most defense attorneys
8135680 They won't be able to respond I think, they've been banned. Probably for the comments on their page. I wouldn't be surprised if it was something else though with how they acted.
Not wanting to read fics about forgiveness is fine but you should always voice your opinions reasonably rather then beating people over the head with them.
8135823 I agree with you on this subject.
8133099 keep reading I look forward to what you think of the rest of the story I should I hope have the new chapter up soon.
Ouch... heavy.
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Thanks for the comment I look forward to what you think of the rest of the story as you progress within it.
8133173 The only defense attorney I like is Phoenix Wright anyway.
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OBJECTION!
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um okay not sure why you objected to the attorney but alright I'll let it be sustained