Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Yeesh, as if things weren't bad enough already. About half a dozen things are going on and poor Sunset is stuck in the middle of all of them. My guess is that when things really get started, Anon-A-Miss is going to be the least of Sunset's worries.
I liked the little backstory we got for Summer. Not overly complicated, but it did a good job of showing her pain and the reason for her devotion to Gilda. It's also interesting that Summer is from another alternate Equestria. Although it begs the question: how many Sunsets are out there and how will they cause trouble for our Sunset?
7776761 Uh what makes you think that Summer Sunrise isn't from the same equestria as Sunset Shimmer is from? Any how thanks for the wonderful comment I look forward to reading more comments from you in the future. I should have another chapter up in a few days and can't wait to see what you think of it.
Wow, Star Wars Episode 2 much.
The prequel trilogy was bad yet you decided to reference it...
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
0:57_12/7/2016
7776778 Cause you said that the Gilda from Summer's dimension is dead, and last I checked our Gilda was still alive and kicking. I suppose that, in this story of yours, Equestria's Gilda could be dead, but I have no reason to assume that. Thus I came to the conclusion that Summer is from another alternate world.
7776802 Thanks for the comment I did a bit more than simply reverence that movie I also took a piece from star trek: Enterprise as well. I hope you at least liked the chapter. Can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter once it comes out that is.
7776829 Go back and reread all the chapters from beginning to end look for the clues like the mark that Sunset has then look for what Summer Sunrise keeps calling her before she calls her Sunset Shimmer. I am sure you'll figure out what i did with these characters. Oh once you do figure it out please I ask only that you don't put into the comments I don't want to spoil it for the rest of the readers. If you do figure it out just PM me with the answer. Thanks for the really cool comment by the way. Hope you enjoyed the chapter can't wait to see what you think of the next one once it is ready to go.
7776841 awesome story. curious question, when are the human CMC gonna be busted for the incident?
7777105 Soon I wanted to show Sunset talking with Fluttershy, Pinkie and Rarity before she ask for help from Twilight then I was going to show the days past page and after that I was going to have Sunset talk with Applejack then Rainbow and finally bust the Cmc I have a few more Celestia and Twilight chapters to do as well so it might not be in that order but I will be busting them. I hope it will also come out in a rather amusing way or be it a "Should have kept quite way"
7777108 how do you plan to make it amusing in some way? (when the Anon-A-Miss and Sunset's death wasn't even funny)
Well this just got 10x worse.
...Um, sorry if I'm being "That guy" but when is Sunset going to die?
Don't get me wrong, I like this fic, but we're 40 plus chapters in and so far we had this thing with Sombra, Flashbacks with Celestia, a subplot with Sunsets twin (At least, I think it's her twin. I'm just assuming from the last chapter) , And a possible subplot with the officer on trying to find proof that Sunset's the culprit that assaulted her.
7777306 You sir are not in any way being that guy. I told another reader of this story that I want to have Sunset talk with Pinkie then with Rarity. Before she ask Twilight for help. I also need to show how Twilight gets better So with that said I am looking at least six maybe eight more chapters before we get to the really dark chapters. and oh just because Sunset dies in this doesn't mean that is how the story ends.
7777169 It will get darker than what has already been shown.
7777144 I need to do some research before I can show you what i am talking about or at least what I want to show within the chapter where the cmc get caught.
Well thanks to the last chapter and this one, I can't help but think that things are going to get very very interesting indeed!
Again, interesting references and chapters, though I actually missed one of the refs. I'll have to think on it. I really was surprised you pulled the SW Ep2 card out as well.
Though I think there's going to be quite a few different challenges as well.
Though, thinking on it in fact, Sunset IS kind of strong, but her magic I bet is strongest.
Sunrise seems to be a physical aspect considering how strong she is. Perhaps mixed parentage as well?
Really though, this is going to be quite a crazy ride and I can't wait to see what else happens.
7777738 Thank you for the wonderful comment I should have another chapter up soon I hope.
7776802 Yeah I know I went with starwars episode two here but I thought that was a good line to use. Any how I should have another chapter up soon I hope and I can't wait to read your comments on that chapter as well. Thanks for the comment on this chapter hope to read your comments again soon.
200 years and now I've met someone else who knows our language, I'm too old for this sh--
Stuff. She said stuff.
Another car for the train wreck? To quote Ratchet from Robots, "This is gonna get greasy!"
I noticed that Adagio's name was misspelled a couple of times.
I'm guessing that someone must like Attack of the Clones.