Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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I am intrigued again!
7660166 I have to admit I was really nervous about posting that chapter I thought it would kill the story I am really grateful and very happy that you enjoyed it. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the next chapter once it is out and posted.
The chapter was very heavily influenced by BlueColton's
A sound in the dark
If you are willing please check out his work and the art work that contains his cover art.
Chrysalis? What's she doing around there?
7663158 You'll have to keep reading to find out.
Okay, seriously, why was my comment deleted? It was a genuine concern. Can't you take any criticism, wiccanminnesota?
Ugh, but what happened at Crystal IRidge? It's kinda frustrating having Celestia tell the whole story to Luna but glancing over it for readers. Well, it's probably in a future chapter, so in that case the suspense is killing me. Good job so far. And the two Sunset's is an especially good twist, so I definitely look forward to seeing how that plays out.
I will say one complaint, however, that I have so far, and that is that some characters act very differently from canon. In this chapter it was Celestia punching Luna, but much more prominently in previous chapters it's been Sweetie Belle. Even from what little we've seen of the EQG Sweetie Belle, there's almost nothing in canon that suggests that she can be the kind of bully she is in this story.
I'm also way behind on these chapters, so no spoilers.
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If you want to know what happened at Crystal Ridge keep reading. there is a chapter that fully covers everything.
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Celestia knocks her sister out to keep her from going into the mansion Celestia knows that there is pure evil inside that mansion and doesn't want to risk her sister's life. Knowing that her sister would follow her and would more than likely succumb to that evil Celestia made a judgement call which was to let her sister follow her into the mansion and risk becoming evil or knock her out and take that evil on by herself. Celestia chose to keep her sister out of it by the only means she had at the time being which was to know her sister out cold. There will be a chapter explaining all of this I just have not written it yet.