Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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I'm gonna be honest. i'm really not enjoying this so far. it feels kinda boring, to be honest and it's because you're doing everything from BEFORE the incident, sometimes that works, but here i just feel bored.
not to mention the grammar. it is better than the first chapter, but it's still not really great and i keep getting pulled out of the story because of it.
I will keep reading this, but, and i really am sorry about this, this story is going in my Meh shelf. Though, still, if it thought it were REALLY bad, it would've gone in my Badly Handled shelf, but it isn't. so, that shows this definitely has promise as a story.
I'm getting a really bad feeling in my stomach and it's only getting worse... It's probably because I know what's to come and I'm anticipating that point when it all goes down, so probably a case of "the suspense is killing me!" I'll try to hold off from spoiling myself as long as possible to enjoy the full ride.
I think that it is amazing and for me at least, one of a kind. cause this is the first fan fic i have seen with the context of the slumber party and what led up to it.
The grocery store?
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Uh, no that comment that Sunset makes to Applejack is actually from the comic book Sunset is actually asking Applejack if her little sister did indeed call her Piggly Wiggly.
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LOL.