Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Wait Sonata drained Sunset Bull! How she going to get her revenge it be a year?!
Unless even that spell will fail to stop her?
i want Sunset to get ehr full revenge COME ON!
Go Sonata!!!
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Let me get the next chapter out and you'll see what Sunset will do and how she will get her revenge. Keep your shirt on I have not even written the next chapter yet sheesh. It will take me a few days to get the next one out and you'll see what happens.
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Good while i don't want anyone to die, I still want to see her get some major payback, and losing her abilties for a year got dammit.
i was looking forward to seeing her go full demon on their asses, to see how badly they screwed up, to see what levels they drove her to.
That is a fate worst then any death or torture.
but anyways sorry if i sounded impatient just been looking forward for the sweet sweet revenge.
Hope Sunset throws in thier faces how thier little siblings killed all her dreams and hopes.
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Don't worry what I did in the last chapter was set, things up for the prophecy to come to pass. I can't get into further detail about it but you should know not all the characters will survive the sequel. And at least two will be in the third one as they must find a way home.
Furies, also known as the Erinyes, the infernal goddesses of vengeance in Greek myth. Neat. Fits right with the Sirens.
So, which one is Sunset in this?
Alecto because she basically runs on anger now?
Tisiphone because she's avenging her own murder?
Or Megaera because the crimes against her were commited out of jealousy?
I could call Sonata pulling a new spell out her ass, that immediately solves the problem at hand, a cop out, but this is entirely in-character for MLP, so i won't complain.
The love confession was kind of a surprise though, didn't think that their relationship had progressed to that part yet. Or maybe i'm just misremembering the last couple of chapters.
Anyway, i just hope that Sunset's still got enough juice left to take her revenge.
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Sunset if I had to choose one of the Furies would be the last one in your list. Yes, Sunset has enough magic left to take her revenge. In the next chapter, I plan to show or at least try to hint at that Sunsets physical form has been slightly changed as I am trying to show and give her character a means to begin her redemption. Sonata's love for Sunset has been placed into several chapters throughout this story and I felt it was time for Sonata to admit her feelings for Sunset.
A Fury eh? That's something new. Most of the time people tend to go with a standard issue demon or nightmare. Not bad. Keep it up.
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I would like to point out that the chapter seemed a bit diolog heavy though, but overall was still an enjoyable read.
Sonata's so sweet in this chapter even though I still ship Sunset with Flash It's nice that Sunset has two admirerer's throughout the story. Lets hope Sonata's spell actually had an effect or Sunset is gonna be super pissed. I wonder how the human Star Swirl will be like in this story I hope he'll be able to help Luna make things right. I look forward to the next chapter BTW just ignore those who are impatient I know a good story takes time and editing😉
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I agree.
Sonata, the only siren that kills me with the amount of adorableness she produces each and every time she's in a scene. Now I can't decide on whom I want Sunset with more, Rainbow or Sonata......
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Thank you for the comment I very much look forward to your thoughts about the next chapter once it comes out.
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You know I originally thought I knew what was going to happen, I was constantly thinking about what what might happen next. Then the demon heart stuff threw me off, and then that awesome song, that I really really want to see a fanmade vid for that scene. I can't wait and hope you have a wonderful day.
Sincerely,
Sar Meister
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Song? what song I don recall which song you are talking about.
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I believe it's called I remember those eyes following me or something. It was during the senior dance or something along those lines.
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Oh, that song! well, there is a video of it on youtube.
There is a video version of it that I used to help create the song that you see in the Dance With Evil chapter.
The song is called, "I know those eyes/this man is dead"
I can link you the video if you like. Just to let you know the song won't be the same song that you see in my story however it will be the same tune that song was supposed to be sung to. Much of what is in the song on Youtube helped me to write the song in the chapter.
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Nah I've already listened to it a Sh**ton of times lols, in fact I'm kinda just waiting for when my favorite pony youtubers adapt it to their story, like the other songs they did.
But yeah I loved that scene, it might just be my favorite scene so far in the entire fanfic and I'm just really curious to see the path that everything takes.
Anyways if you ever just wanna chat or whateves, just send me a PM and we can talk about whatever, hang out, or do the friendship things.
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Thank you, hope you have a wonderful day. Oh, I will be transferring this story to Wattpad I'll send you a link to it once I get it done as I will be including about twenty extra chapters to it. These chapters are to help introduce the character Eventide Shimmer Soleil into the story to help show what her character did before Twilight and the other main six met her. There will be other things added to the story as well which will be my attempt to show and give a better reason for what happened to Sunset. Yes, the story will remain on this website the Wattpad version is the more darker version of this story. This version is what I call the 'Light Adult' version the Wattpad version is what I like to call 'The dark adult version'
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Alright, BRING ON THE PAIN so if I understand this correct both stories will be continued to be updated, just that this one is lighter than the one on wattpadd?
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correct.
I will be updating the story on this website and will be adding chapters to the one that will appear on Wattpad.
The one on Wattpad will be much darker and will also introduce other characters as well it will also give a background to Eventide Shimmer Soliel.
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Can't wait *explodes from excitement*
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It will take me a few weeks to get the first few chapters ready for review I'll be sure to send the link once I feel the story is ready for review. Anyhow, I need to work on the next chapter for this site looking forward to your thoughts on it once it comes out. Take care now.
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Will do and you do the same mein friend, also are you really a Wiccan as your name implies? *curious*
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Yes, I am. I am what's called a solitary eclectic Wiccan. Meaning I practice alone and I take what I need from all faiths that are of the pagan path and incorporate them into my life.
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Nice, my grandmother is a wiccan, and has some friends who also practice it. I'm on the fence, mostly because while my grandmother is wiccan, my mother, to my knowledge, is Roman C. So I mostly just mesh the two together for my everyday life..... Does it sound weird contradictory? Probably, but I'm still not convinced that there needs to be one right religion.
thanks for answering my curiosity
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You are most welcome and no it doesn't sound weird to me at all just follow your heart and you'll always find your path.
ok, rereading this chapter, while I 100% support Sunata, I do think this kinda came outta nowhere...
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Yeah I can see where that might be. I will show in the sequel how far those to have come in their relationship and how Trixie plays into that relationship
Sunset is literally living on evil right now.