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Even the Angels aren't Innocent

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zdaysavior

zdaysavior #1 · Jan 14th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Alright, haven't even started yet but will say this, you need to re-read what you write, sine glaring errors in the description alone that takes away from the story immediately

EverfreePony

EverfreePony #2 · Nov 9th, 2017 · · ·

Hmm... it’s an interesting beginning, but as another user said, there are some typos and spelling errors, but it’s nothing a good editor can’t fix. (If you wish, I can take a look at it.)

Sly Moon