- Member Since 20th Oct, 2013
- offline last seen Dec 14th, 2023
Sly Moon
There are no skeletons in my closest. Really. However there is a tiny black box of souls in my underwear drawer... :D
Sly Moon
Joined 20th Oct, 2013 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Hopeful Soul · 7.1k words · 57 27 · 6k views
- StormLuna · 6.1k words · 50 33 · 1.5k views
Featured In13
Clopfics11,546 stories ·15,814 members
Fluttershy4,016 stories ·2,925 members
Humanized Ponies!5,597 stories ·3,468 members
- F/F ships2,904 stories ·1,412 members
- Struggling Authors25,180 stories ·3,671 members
Authors Helping Authors8,590 stories ·2,462 members
Equestria Girls Fics12,109 stories ·3,767 members
Rage Reviews!1,082 stories ·1,628 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.086 seconds
Total duration
935 users online
357,610 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
For the love of CELESTIA
GET AN EDITOR!
Your second sentence has a spelling mistake. "Her" instead of what I presume should be "Here."
There are commas all over the place (I should talk)
A SEVERE lack of periods,
I'm sorry darling, this is hardly readable.
You need a prereader and an editor.
Wow, good start! Interesting idea, but you may need an editor.
I agree with the other comments. You need an editor and someone to proof read this. In fact, proof read it yourself for a second draft. This seems simple enough to edit to remove obvious mistakes, so I can do so if you want.
This is looking very promising. However, I agree with what the others have said. You should get an editor to fix all those mistakes.
I hope this continues. I'm really curious to see where this goes.
7782838 Don't worry it will continue I'm hoping to have the next chapter out before the end of the year.
EqG tags have been updated
7878900 Thanks for reminding me I had forgotten about that.
When is Thi going to be updated?
8100549 Should be very soon ive had a bad case of writers block lately on top of being busy with things.
8118600 Cool. Because this story idea is good.