• Member Since 21st Mar, 2012
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FoxMcCloud7921


Not much to say except that I love video games, my favorite series being Star Fox and Mass Effect; reading, sports, etc. I have a separate FanFiction account where more of my stories can be found.

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“Did you call them?” Luna had suddenly got in her face.

I think a more appropriate phrase would be:
‘Suddenly Luna was right in her face. “Did you call them?”’


Other than that I found this to be an interesting start to a story, can’t wait to see where this goes!

its good nice work:twilightsmile:

Reminds me of Principal Celestia and the Undead, really nice so far.

"Not like they’d believe there are actual zombies…” Sunset murmured.

So said the pretty magical unicorn from the magical land of magical pretty pony princesses.
She still has no idea how outlandish she's herself, does she? :derpytongue2:

I just ask one thing: it might come early or it might come late, but PLEASE give us werepony Sunset! She's going to be cute as :yay:

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Gonna continue this? As it'll be interesting to say the least.

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