• Member Since 21st Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 9th, 2023

FoxMcCloud7921


Not much to say except that I love video games, my favorite series being Star Fox and Mass Effect; reading, sports, etc. I have a separate FanFiction account where more of my stories can be found.

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So, is this just a one shot, or did you mark it complete by accident?

Is this meant to be marked as complete? Cause, other than the description, not very dark.

Glad to see you back, but I do have to ask why is this a mature, dark, and completed story?

It wasn’t her peak speed, but she was going about the speed of sound, which was enough to break right through the ship’s exterior and at exactly the right she caused the ship to explode, launching the crew into the atmosphere and far, far away from Ponyville. “Curse you Twilight Sparkle!” the captain yelled as they disappeared into the distance.

LOOKS LIKE TEAM ROCKET's BLASTING OFF AGAAAAAIIINNNN!!!!!

This seems like it can turn into an interesting story.

...Woah. Now that's an interesting AU idea.

So, they will catch this Starlight in a lie. Princess Twilight will come over to ask a few questions that Starlight should know the answer to. This Starlight won't know and will then spill the whole plan. Princess Twilight will run back through the mirror to rescue her student.

Yeah, fanatics are always trouble.

Shit is about to HIT. THE. FAN.

Well, as if things weren't already interesting.

You should get more likes, bit you take too much to update, so that is it way XD.

When will you update I want really to see what happens next?!

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