A typical school night goes awry when Sunset Shimmer has her first encounter with the undead. Now she's given an opportunity to aid in a secret war to save the world.
“Did you call them?” Luna had suddenly got in her face.
I think a more appropriate phrase would be: ‘Suddenly Luna was right in her face. “Did you call them?”’
Other than that I found this to be an interesting start to a story, can’t wait to see where this goes!
its good nice work
Reminds me of Principal Celestia and the Undead, really nice so far.
I think a more appropriate phrase would be:
‘Suddenly Luna was right in her face. “Did you call them?”’
Other than that I found this to be an interesting start to a story, can’t wait to see where this goes!
its good nice work
Reminds me of Principal Celestia and the Undead, really nice so far.