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Pinkie has a very important request for Rainbow Dash.

Inspired by this picture here and happened thanks to Reddit because I saw someone request it and a nice fellow named ocalhoun offered to do it (and did do it! Check out ocalhoun's story here!), but I wanted to try my hand at it too!

First Published
8th Jun 2016
Last Modified
8th Jun 2016
#1 · 41w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

Wow, our short descriptions were really similar. (Not to mention the titles.)

Time to read the rest!

*edit*

Wow, that was fun, especially seeing how the two of us described the exact events in the comic slightly differently. The getting punched in the face thing was a fun take on it (and honestly, I expected her to accidentially hit her face on Rainbow's still-outstretched hoof!)

I also found it sort of curious that we both chose the exact same POV: Past tense, third person limited, focused on Pinkie, with a bit of Pinkiness thrown into the narration, but not enough to make it really annoying. I have to admit, I dithered quite a bit when getting started about what POV to do it in ... as we can see from these two stories, there's only one way to do it right!

*edit again*

Wow... I just realized that the two of us joined Fimfic about a month apart, way back in 2012. :rainbowderp:

You're like my long-lost brother or something! :pinkiegasp:

#2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·

So friggin' cute...

#3 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·

Cute story. Never thought of a RariPie ship.  Might go read more stories that involve those two.

#4 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·

Interesting 'ship. Well-written, funny as all heck too. Ah, Pinkie. :D

#5 · 41w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

This is just like the time where me an Autum Breeze posted the exact same story simultaneously.

It was about the Equestria Girls Trixie being regressed down to a four-year old girl, and now Sunset has to try and take care of her until Twilight has the cure...

Speaking of which, I need to update that soon. Wrote one chapter and just forgot it, it seems...

#6 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·

At first I had no idea what getting punched in the mouth had to do with getting a kiss on a boo-boo.  Then halfway though, it just clicked for me, and I really hoped that I was right, because I love being right-and I was right!:yay::pinkiehappy:  Although to be honest, for a moment at the end, I was worried that Pinkie Pie would start crushing on Rainbow Dash instead-traumatic imprinting seems like something Pinkie would do.

#7 · 41w, 5d ago · 2 · 3 ·

I reviewed this story as part of Read It Now #82.

My review can be found here.

#8 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·

I really enjoyed the characterization in this. Pinkie Pie is so much more of a cartoon character than the others and its fun to see her interact with the other more "real" characters. Also, smitten Pinkie Pie is adorable.

I have to say I like this one a lot better than the "sister" fic. The other feels really shallow. Just a kiss for the sake of a kiss with nothing behind it (well, Pinkie's feelings are mentioned but you just get told "Pinkie had a crush on Rarity," there's nothing solid to read).

I think sticking to Pinkie's infatuation and her cartoonish reaction worked very well, and the ending was pretty funny.

Nice job.

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#9 · 39w, 11h ago · 2 · ·

Rarity was definitely a classy lady like Rarity

I've read at least five fics today, most of them comedies, and this is far and away the funniest line in any of them. :D

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