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Summer Dancer


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Fluttershy never thought she would be called "Cute" before. Now that she has, she doesn't like it one bit.

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I know the feeling. :fluttershyouch:

...:yay:

I'm sorry, Flutters, but there's no denying it. :pinkiesmile:

That was a cute...
Er...
Nice story.

Nice job!

7228572 Thanks! Writing Fluttershy is hard, I never wrote her as a main character before :raritydespair::rainbowlaugh:

Congrats on getting featured:pinkiehappy:

This is needed, but... Dammit Spike!

Needs... More... SPIKE!

"Hey so I just saved your life from a Hydra and I'm mad at you for calling me cute, so the least you can do is forgive me for forgetting your name."

7228506 Yes eLLen, you're cute too! :scootangel:

I finally managed to find/ stumble into a Fluttershy (Explore Equestria series). Yay, finally got myself FS. And she's adorable.

(Kinda ticked off that Starlight is part of the series, but no Sunset anywhere.)

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Don't worry too much. For a first-time attempt at writing about Fluttershy, this seems pretty decent.

I'll give a more insightful comment later regarding the story and the technical details.

Can we call you adorable Fluttershy-?

:flutterrage: NO!!!

Hmm. I wonder what that guy's name was though.

As always, great story Summer!

7229355 Thanks Kids! He shall forever be the pony without a name :ajsleepy:

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Doh! Blasted Spike sending letters at just the wrong time!

plot twist his name is blue pony or Yew something lol

“Can my daughter have a sample of one of your almond muffins?” the pony asked in a high nasally voice.

“Sure!” Pinkie replied picking one up from the glass display. “Would you like one too?”

“No thanks,” the mother said, accepting the muffin. “I just wanna see if my daughter's allergic.”

“....”

Well that was random. :rainbowderp: (That seriously felt like something out of Clerks...)

Pinkie Pie pounced on top of the counter. “But we’re here! We’ll take care of the Hydra!”

Fluttershy stared up at her friend as if she just announced she was a changeling.

Would it matter if she was? :trollestia:

Pinkie pressed a hoof to her chest. “But according to my heart...absolutely. We might not be as strong as Rainbow Dash and Applejack...and we might not have magic like Twilight or Rarity. But we do have our own strengths we can use to help defeat it.”

Plus, y'know...Spike can breathe fire at it.

Mare Mayor stared after them. “Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie are going to save us?” She sunk to the floor, gripping her head in her hooves. “We’re DOOMED!”

Yeah, it's not like Fluttershy ever vanquished a dragon and a cockatrice or anything. It's not like Pinkie Pie saved Ponyville from a swarm of Parasprites.

“When I release you, you’re going to put my friend down, and you’re going to tell me what’s wrong. Understand?”

Why do I get the feeling I know exactly where this is going?

What did the Hydra say, Fluttershy?” Pinkie Pie asked.

“The swamp water at Froggy Bottom Bog is thinning out,” Fluttershy explained.

Oh. Guess I was wrong. Makes more sense, though. I thought it was mad because somepony called it cute. :derpytongue2:

That was a fun little read. Love the running joke with Blue pony's name. :rainbowlaugh:

Denying that you're cute just makes you seem cuter.

Oh, Fluttershy! she mentally scolded herself, avoiding eye contact. How could you have forgotten something important as his NAME? She opened her mouth again before closing it shut, thinking against it. I’d ask what is, but...oh, that would be rude of me. He’ll think that I think his name wasn't important enough to remember!

Ha! Yeeeeeep! I know all about that!
I'm terrible with names and of course being too embarrassed to admit it and not wanting to come off as rude I regularly end up having full conversations with acquaintances while having absolutely no clue what their name is! :ajsleepy:
So nice portrayal of Flutters I guess! And it's certainly interesting to think about how she might feel about her fans and their... general... view of her :fluttershyouch:
Then again...

“I’m cute, you’re cute, Spike’s cute…” She threw her front hooves up in the air enthusiastically. “Everypony’s cute! Everypony wins!”

Pinkie's got the right idea there...

7229365 Plot :twistnerd:: Button Mash actually knew and yelled his name when he was snatched by the Hydra.

Yes, that means his name is Random Pony. Problem?

That is what the title reminded me of. Watch the video in full its funny as hell

I'M SO FRUSTRATED I COULD JIZZ CREAM

A story based when three of the four mane six voice actors are out of action ;)

“Oh, I’m terrified. But I’m even more terrified of letting Ponyville get destroyed when when it needed us the most!”

One too many When's here.

I love the story by the way.
The characterization was just top notch.
I especially liked Spike and Pinkie in this, that first fee scene where Pinkie and Spike were just talking before Fluttershy arrived. I think it would be kinda awesome to see a story about Pinkie and Spike spending the day together and getting into trouble. :moustache: :pinkiegasp:

But the true gold of this fic was the Shy one. Nice. :yay:
So many yays.

“Can my daughter have a sample of one of your almond muffins?” the pony asked in a high nasally voice.
“Sure!” Pinkie replied picking one up from the glass display. “Would you like one too?”
“No thanks,” the mother said, accepting the muffin. “I just wanna see if my daughter's allergic.”
“....”

That deserves a like. :rainbowlaugh:

I hate being called "cute".

"Don't Call Me That Please..."

Why does it makes me want to call her cute even more?
Am I an horrible person for going against the wishes of such a cu-er... nice pony? :twilightoops:

Anyway, that story was... cute! :pinkiecrazy:

Wow, that sounds like a new episode of tv show. Except Spike, isn't cowering when the hydra attacks and it has 85% less Starlight. So I really like this story. (Spike is my favorite in the show and I believe they are over using Starlight.)

“You’re supposed to be cute! Cute is how you describe puppies and kittens and...baby dragons! I’m a fully matured pony!”

-looks towards camera- :applejackunsure:

Poor Fluttershy doesn't realize that ponies are both cute and adorable.

Pretty fun.

One thing though, it sounds odd that Fluttershy says "when I release you". It isn't an actual spell, that stare and it would work just as well without that sentence, if you just went with “You’re going to put my friend down, and you’re going to tell me what’s wrong. Understand?” and not sound so much like she was using a spell or a physical bond.

Well done otherwise.

The moral of the the story?

Hydras sleep in water?

Cutie calls instead of cat calls? Oh, that was clever.

“Yeah,” Spike smirked, wrapping his fist against Pinkie’s skull. “Not everypony has a photographic memory like you do! Go on, Fluttershy. What happened next?”

I find the phrasing of this incredibly disturbing. I know what is meant to be said here, but the way it's set up, it seems like Spike is doing something a tad bit more morbid.

Other than that, fun.

Good story I had a few good laughs.

7232516 Hahaha :rainbowlaugh: I did almost put knocked, but I thought that sounded violent :rainbowwild:

A shrill whistle pierced the air. “Heeey Hyyyydraaa!”

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wrapping his fist against Pinkie’s skull

It should actually be "rapping" rather than "wrapping".

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