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Pinkie Pie has become sick and needs to rest for the day. However the forces that allow Pinkie to be, well Pinkie, need no rest and find another to be its host for the day. What will happen to Ponyville when the shy and quiet Fluttershy starts acting weird.
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Big thanks to TheExhaustedBrony, and Timps for spotting my spelling errors XD. Also a thanks to Mr101, Berry Punch for pre-reading as well.
One-Shotober Story #9 10/14/2013
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Hah. This is actually a pretty fun idea. Still, I think I would have liked it better if it was more of a gradual, general phenomenon rather than some literal Pinkie Force. Especially since explaining how things work isn't how Pinkie... works.
Kinda reminds me of an episode of Disney's Winnie the Pooh, where Pooh loses his appetite and Tigger concludes that he isn't Pooh anymore, meaning someone else has to be Pooh, which eventually causes the entire cast to shift personalities and it's never explained exactly why. That sort of surrealness was one of the things I really liked about that show.
Shut up and take my money!
I think it was a pretty fun story, and interesting as well. Good work. The pacing seemed a bit rushed, but it was well written for the most part lol.
Nice story there!
Had a nice laugh, then my roommates are asked me why I was laughing because its 5:30 in the morning... I think I woke them up.
Of course we did Pinkie. Don't worry as we won't tell anyone. Even if it might be amusing to let Twilight know.
unison
residents. Unless we're supposed to keep it secret from the buildings, too.
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Well it is a magical land. Who is to say the buildings can't talk. They could spill the beans if they knew
anywho fixed. Thanks for pointing them out.
Nice idea, though I do think it could've been a bit longer.
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3348572 BEANS SPILLED IN PONYVILLE! News at 11.
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I punched my screen.
Pinkie scared me.
I was wondering how I got nailed in the head by a fast flying woodland creature today.
Yeah, fuck that fourth wall.
okay. i think i'v had enough fic reading for one day.
so i'll just go lay down for a while
Started listening to 'You Raise Me Up' by Andre Rieu at around,
It doesn't fit at all. I'm torn by feelings of utter sadness and feelings of utter laughter.
3674462 the whole new jersy bit was inspired by this clip from Law of Talos.
3674673 I'M DYING.
The Fandom... They who need no rest. Also... Fluttershy still has her Flutter Pie powers... She can see us right there at the end of the story! I'd really be interested in seeing a sequel where that's addressed... And double the epicness ensues... Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy... Flipping off the fourth wall in style.
This is a wonderful pile of hilariousness and I love it. Have a like and a fav
It was nice and funny.
The only problem I have was the whole Pinkie sense thing transferring to pony to pony wasn't really explained well.
Other then that I give it 4 laughing Rd's out of 5.
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