It is still weeks away before winter wrap up is to start. A light breeze sneaks into a house built within a tree outside Ponyville. But a cold chill isn't all that breeze brings into this house.
Chapters (5)
- Member Since 19th Jan, 2012
- offline last seen Aug 31st, 2021
Gildor Surion
I'm strange and complicated in an average and simple way.
Gildor Surion
Joined 19th Jan, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Dynamic Dragon · 8.4k words · 57 8 · 3.2k views
- Flutterpriest · 2.1k words · 216 21 · 5.5k views
- Estee · 2.7k words · 266 17 · 4.3k views
- Nug TWH · 14k words · 37 2 · 3.1k views
- Jet_Black1980 · 78k words · 643 19 · 7.8k views
- Cloud Wander · 11k words · 215 4 · 3.8k views
- Summer Dancer · 4.6k words · 440 22 · 8.1k views
- gapty · 2k words · 51 0 · 848 views
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.176 seconds
Total duration
913 users online
477,308 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
not much to rate with, waiting for more
Gonna track will rate later
Hmm. I'll see where this is going.
I'll agree with them. For the most part the story seems interesting and I kind of want to know the back story between Questi and Pinkie, but I'll just track it and see where it goes. Also I enjoyed the prologue for its uniqueness. Good job and can't wait to see more.
Okay, Sorry for the long wait for this chapter. But I finally got it done. I had a lot of going over and over little bits to make this chapter, and had my prereader look over each bit as I did it. I hope you all enjoy the results. And don't worry, there will be more. And hopefully the next one won't take as long to post.
So full of daaaaaaw
Well, it is finally up. Writers blocks and looking too far ahead caused a delay in the posting of this chapter. So I didn't get it up as fast as I wanted. So I will get the next chapter out when I can. So please bear with me as I possibly fight even more blocks and distracting plot paths.
WOOHOO!
Not bad. Not bad at all.
Caught one small mistake: "Your starting to make less and less sense." --> you're
"The cold winds blow hardly" --> Hardly is an adverb, means only just or certainly not.
The word you probably need is harshly? Hard seems strange
270102 Thanks for pointing those two out. My prereaders even missed them, but we are only human.
Oh, dayum.
First. (Sorry)
Uh Oh......REDEMPTION TIME!
You should probably have somepony proofread this first, I spotted some major grammatical errors. An intriguing chapter though.
Interesting. Can't wait for what happens next. (Well, I CAN, but who actually uses that as a comment?
)
311836 My proof reader is suddenly too busy to do the proofreading.
"Motherhood is Magic" Is the story that got me to get off my lazy rump to start writing this lovely story, that is why I gave it the mention here. So, thank you Ironhoof for giving me the final bit of inspiration to get me into writing this story and thank all of you for sticking with me through all this craziness so far. Knowing that there are people who are enjoying this is what helps fuel my desire to keep writing this story. I learned not to say that I will get things done fast as that causes nothing but troubles. So, please bear with me as I try and get these stubborn words to get together to tell this story.