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Do you have any idea ir there will be a sequel ? Although the ttwist is ver y interesting , no one would be to blame if they justo leaft it at that , since the story works con its own by keeping the readers at the edge of their seats evento when we know what was of king sombra ,so maybe the person who wrote this just wanted to ene with the cliffhanger and leave it at there.
Ps sorry for my bad grammar and shallow pool of expresions, km not a native english speaker but i would hace been more carefull if i wasnt con the go
Wow this is pretty interesting! I thank you for making something like this!
Really interesting take on Sombra :)
Traitor! Traitor to his own offspring!
Good plot, though. A little bit interesting if Cadance were indeed the child of Sombra and the original incarnation of the Crystal Heart in the canon, but still interesting.
Okay first, it started innocently funny (Seriously, I was laughing through the whole ordeal of the sex-ed/intercourse. It's so innocent yet somehow manages to make me laugh
). Funny enough, reading this whole thing, I managed to learn new things about sex! Well, I guess I don't have to take sex-ed now then! 
Second, nice take on the Sombra headcanon, I can probably make a few ideas as to how things occur ahead of time with this cliffhanger though the repercussions are stemming towards dark
Third, those pictures... they are so beautiful! Why did I not find out about this artist anyway?
Fourth, I hope that was a baby Cadance I just saw because that was adorable
Fifth, Snickers a bit before laughing, oh my god someone got a cutie mark during intercourse?! Oh that is diabolically hilarious! And the poor king when he heard his daughter say that one word
All of that together and I'd say I enjoyed this story! I have actually pondered what would happen if one were to remove the intercourse from this but then I realized, nothing would make sense in the first place without it anyway. It's likes one of those books I've read that takes the sex as a secondary to the story-telling and I like that sometimes
All in all, I enjoy this book and am happy this got featured! Oh on to my main question... Clears throat
HOW THE HELL DOES SOMEONE HAVE SEX WITH A CRYSTAL PONY?!
Well that explains everything
And than, Flurry Heart killed the heart of her grand mother...end...
7155080 Getting ''hard'' enough maybe?
I... approve of this tale.
>C: \Favorite.exe and Upvote.exe executed.
Yessss another Loveless fic O mai goodness these are the best!
If I understand that ending correctly, fuck the king.
7155179 Ain't Grandchildren just the most ungrateful little turds?
At first, I was reading a few paragraphs and thought that the story would introduce the famous 'Romeo and Cinderella' scenario, (Vocaloid song by the way
), and have included a bit more story and character development between Sombra. Well, after reading this, I found out that it was within the author's pleasures to create a piece like this. Maybe us sub-authors could further develop the story. 
Mind = blown
ENIGMA IT'S NICE THAT YOU ARE GETTING ALL THESE NICE COMMISSIONS FROM ONE OF MY FAVORITE ARTISTS.
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I talk with him regularly.
7155248 Are you kidding me mate?
This was an amazing fic I'd love to see where the story would go after this I like the idea its based upon alot!
I'm laughing at the beautiful irony of crystal later killing Sombrero.
I'm sad now, but I demand a sequel where Crystal Heart completes the plan by becoming the heart and Sombra turns evil. Please? ~hug
7156446 Hey you asked.
This is just a sad and tragic tale of two lovers and their daughter getting screwed over by an old gramp.
I don't see anything to laught at after their whole sex scene and confrontation.
0/10 not Princess Amore
EDIT: For the record, this was a joke comment. Fie on you downvoters for not seeing it as such.
This story reminds me of a specific Doctor Who episode
In said episode, The Doctor has the chance to kill Davros. It's an interesting concept, because if Davros dies then there's a massive ripple effect. I'd rather not go into details about how destructive it could be. She could have just as easily left Sombra to die, but then what would happen to the Crystal Empire timeline?
So, I'm willing to bet that she hit twenty and turned into the crystal heart. Sombra then goes absolutely insane and kills everyone, overthrowing the king and ruling as a tyrant.
So this s is y somber is obsessed with the crystal heart!
This sounds like a really good story.
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>implying that a nerd would go to the trouble of compiling something instead of just writing a script
git gud scrub
7160707 I was drunk when I typed that.
Still stands, though.
That... got dark quickly. Interesting theory about the Crystal Kingdom and everything though, it was a nice read.
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>implying nerds use exe files
:V
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They're not actually made from crystals, they're still flesh-and-blood
It's magic, just smile and nod
I actually fantasized about dropping a C4 bomb in the middle of the gathering of the old king and his lackeys then detonate the thing. Putting a stop to the tragedy. Or sending a few Terran Ghost-like pony agents to assassinate the king and his many "priest" and burn all the document and research or put it into the special Archive to try and find a better way.
Don't judge me, I'm a Happy Ending kind of guy.
Wow, you surprised me with two twists there mate, and I LOVE IT!
Very sweet and entertaining. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I want to see the sequel and the epilogue. This is an excellent learn to a high-quality story.
Men, this just make Sombra dead a really sad tragedy. But don't get me wrong, i love the story
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Everyone except boomers and weebs know that