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In the description it's "ponies" not "ponyes"
more please!
Oh yeah, Celestia was kind of paranoid about being princess, as shown on the first page of the Journal of the Two Sisters.
Do you need a proofreader? This story isn't bad by any means, I just want to help.
6286653 Thanks for the offer but I will try to do this myself, the more you write the better you become.
6286699 My offer will stand as long as needed.
Is this connected to your other star fox crossover?
6425270 NO.
This was a good read. Some grammar faults here and there but that`s alright. I would like to see more of this story. Interesting to read about Wolf O`Donnel being in the world of My little pony.
There are some typos here and there, but otherwise it looks good to me.
MOAR!
This story is awesome please make more
The Hate Towards Celestia I Love It
Still as good as ever I see, keep up the good work.
And a name for a snow wolf ... How about Frost ? If you want it to be related to snow of course.
I was also thinking Fang or you can mix both to do Frost Fang of course I'm just showing a few propositions I'm sure you can find cool names related to snow, wolves or a mix of both, but yeah for me "Frost" "Fang" or "Frost Fang".
Hello wolf my old friend now we meet here again another chapter up finally the dry spell is over
7321818 Frost Fang, that is a awesome name so I'm going to use it. Thanks.
7322658 hmm looks like your King Sombra is not as evil as Celedtia and Luna said he is
Ah it's back ! Thanks for that ^^
Well so far so good. I just wonder where you're going with that story.
I suppose we'll see. Keep up the good work
Thanks
It's back! Great Author's Note at the beginning btw, just outright tell them to bugger off if they wanna complain about grammar mistakes. Keep up the great work!
Well after Sheild got kicked in the balls I was laughing in my head and almost felt sorry but in reality I did not he got a ball busting part
7461269 Don't worry, I have a plan.
I hope that kick popped them both...on another note, brilliant chapter can't wait to see what happens next
Glad your back dude I missed this story
More please.
xD. Oh boy... They'll be scared of that, that's for sure
Please continue, now that Wolf has a small love triangle between Amethyst, and Shyla.
Ha you're on a roll I see and once more thank you for continuing this.
As for how you handled the characters well I have nothing to say honestly I enjoyed that chapter.
Also thanks for choosing my proposal for the snow wolf's name.
7466281 I didn't write it like a love triangle and that's not the plan.
7466706
Ok, good to know. Still great work, keep it up.
7466346 There's no love triangle, that's not the idea.
7466904 Yup I removed my part about that just understood it when I read the chapter a second time.
Dunno why I felt like it was going that way, though you have to admit it would be fun as hell
Well amethyst is written well I like it her being clumsy and a bit of a ditz suits the little pegasus psychiatric nurse continue with the good job
lol, nice work with Flash, wonder how he's gonna pull this one off or how he's gonna get Wolf back for this one, gonna prolly be hilarious when it happens and yay! It's returned!!!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next
this was nice and i would love to wake up to having wings and if the wings are draconic that would make me happy i would fly everywhere and the only fuel i would need is food not gas
Loved the chapter, keep it up! There are still some grammatical errors, but I understood what you were saying. Also, I love that Wolf is actually trying to commit to a serious relationship.
Soldiers in the street? Oh this should be interesting
Awwwwwwww amethyst is adorable.....
...... Run.......
Great chapter I'm glad you decided against cancellation
And now the plot thickens
Well, Wolf better suit up and show Equestria why he was arguably the second best pilot in the Lylat system
Well.......That can't be good, father is too thick headed to see what's in front of his face and smoke with it coming from an important place plus main hero panicking.....yeah that never bodes well, can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully the father will pull his head outta the dirt and stop Celestia in time
Many people are silent about their opinions. This is a great story, not many go the tyrant Celestia route.