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"WE ARE THE FANGS OF THE IMPERIUM!!!"- 627th warbeast war cry

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This story is for my new years revolution...

revolution eh? which country are you freeing? btw like'n the story so far

"Welcome on deck captain,"

Bruh when i read this the first voice i thought of was https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=k9r0VhwBbt0

I love the beginning. Moar plezzzzzz

I love the story 😍

Great work keep it up

Before I read this, I saw the warnings, and read thisSTAR WARS, STAR FOX, OTHER SCI-FI SERIES whhyyyyyy, I thought this was just gonna be a displaced Protogen story, but ya gotta add them, fine I guess, I shall read in a bit

Ok, now you got my attention.:heart: But for your own sake, stick to it, and not jump randomly like everyone else.:facehoof:

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Okay, well, star wars is good and all, and your not actually putting it into this story besides some weapons and stuff, but for star fox? Meh, never liked it, but I do like this story so far

Okay, I want more, I liked this chapter even tho it was short, please keep this up bud

Mate. U better make this long and complete. That will be your New Years revolution

Interessting start. :rainbowdetermined2: Whats the angle? Exploration party? First contact scenario? :rainbowderp:
Well this story get into my watching folder :twilightsmile:

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Dont you mean chapter? There isnt really mutch at the moment here :raritywink:

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*Brohoof* 》》》 /)(\ γ€Šγ€Šγ€Š

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Thanks a thousand times. :raritystarry: That answered almost all my questions about the basics :pinkiehappy:

Now im really hyped for this story :yay:

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Lets hope hes breathing isnt so tough... Would be annoying as hell...

Someone was bound to make a Protogen story, I too was at the process of making one before, just didn't get to finish making it. Well.... good job being the first one, i guess, not quite what I expected, but good story either way. Pls. Continue.

I like the story but please spell check.

I'm interested to see where this goes.

Comment posted by Drake Draconian deleted Jan 19th, 2020
DNC

Not a bad start.:pinkiesmile: I look forwerd to seeing were this will go.:pinkiesmile: Now if i may be so bold.:duck: You should think about getting him a sword soon.:pinkiesmile: Not only would it be good for self defense in a close fight, having the right one would look purity cool.:rainbowdetermined2: One example/suggestion i could give would be the sword zero (a coincidence i swear:twilightblush:) uses in borderlands 2.:pinkiesmile: i1.wp.com/makezine.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/05/zero-sword.png?resize=1200%2C670&strip=all&ssl=1

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I was thinking something more akin to Murasama from metal Gear Rising would fit the tone better.

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Now I'm imagining it as the combination of your suggestion and his, a blue version of hf murasama blade so to speak.

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This story does have the Star Wars tag on it. So, lets just give him a lightsaber and be done with it.

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Dark blade for example
vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/a/a6/Darksaber-SWE.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20110918165551
Also, some Mandalorian equipment would help, but maybe it should look different but have the same functionality

DNC

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Have to agree with Regret12.:pinkiesmile: Chang the color to mach zero's armor and it would look pretty good.:pinkiehappy:

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Personally i think that would be over kill.:applejackunsure: Besides hf murasama would fit better with the image.:pinkiecrazy:

Besides my many limbs I had this ship also holds one hell of a 3-D printer or replicator whatever you want to call it.

Maybe something from Prey?
Like fabricator and recycler
gamepedia.cursecdn.com/prey_gamepedia_en/6/66/Fabricator.png?version=6b3e9856cd6f5b9ca555f8dafcb0a0eb
giantbomb1.cbsistatic.com/uploads/original/0/5370/3020781-4352078027-cef24.PNG

DNC

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Now i wish i looked for this before i posted the last comment.:twilightblush::facehoof:
i.imgur.com/EczOAZX.jpg

You better not puss out and stop doing this you always keep putting stories o hiatus or quitting stop doing that I really love these stories and everytime its gets good you QUIT IT STOP IT!

DUUUDEEE! I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY ALREADY :rainbowlaugh:

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As far as close combat goes hes extreamly strong and his default fist attack is reinforced with power claws.

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Purrrfect!

DNC

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Raiden was no slouch with hand to hand ether,:ajbemused: that didn't mean he dropped his sword.:ajbemused: Aside from the potential of earth pones,:applejackunsure: dragons,:rainbowderp: and all other psychically powerful races out there?:duck: There comes a point were it's not about just power, but style as well.:duck::pinkiecrazy:

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The moment a dragon needs to be defeated he will use long range weapons or just orbital bomb the shit out of the enemy 'mass Effect 3 reaper on tuchanka' style

Pinkie Pie needs to make a:
'welcome aliens to Equestria party'

How many set do the ship have for the MC?

Exploration / research - confirmed
Combat - confirmed
Aquatic Terrain- confirmed

How about avian equicment?

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Also he has a ship full of droids. Pretty sure asking a dreadnought captain to 1vs1 a dragon is a bit to abstract :derpytongue2:

Ok... we missed a major point...
Male?
Female?
Both?
Maybe a IT ... That might FIT :trollestia:

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Cant comment anymore... Only edit old messages... Nice new story. Well edited and very fine background πŸ‘:coolphoto:

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