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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6F6u5TIUbI
revolution eh? which country are you freeing? btw like'n the story so far
Bruh when i read this the first voice i thought of was https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=k9r0VhwBbt0
I love the beginning. Moar plezzzzzz
Very interesting
I love the story 😍
for those who are curious
https://youtu.be/_bn-DrESedE
Great work keep it up
Before I read this, I saw the warnings, and read thisSTAR WARS, STAR FOX, OTHER SCI-FI SERIES whhyyyyyy, I thought this was just gonna be a displaced Protogen story, but ya gotta add them, fine I guess, I shall read in a bit
Ok, now you got my attention. But for your own sake, stick to it, and not jump randomly like everyone else.
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Okay, well, star wars is good and all, and your not actually putting it into this story besides some weapons and stuff, but for star fox? Meh, never liked it, but I do like this story so far
Okay, I want more, I liked this chapter even tho it was short, please keep this up bud
Mate. U better make this long and complete. That will be your New Years revolution
ok, i REALLY want more!
Interessting start. Whats the angle? Exploration party? First contact scenario?
Well this story get into my watching folder
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Dont you mean chapter? There isnt really mutch at the moment here
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*Brohoof* 》》》 /)(\ 《《《
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Thanks a thousand times. That answered almost all my questions about the basics
Now im really hyped for this story
Drack vadder
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Lets hope hes breathing isnt so tough... Would be annoying as hell...
:)
Ok... we missed a major point...
Male?
Female?
Both?
Maybe a IT ... That might FIT
Edit
Cant comment anymore... Only edit old messages... Nice new story. Well edited and very fine background 👍
Now I can't wait to see this ball rolling!
Displaced make a Everfree spawn logical but a spaceship? I land my ships only in free spaces...
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Clearly you have never experience the rush of Adrenalin after impaling a space ship over trees. It can be quite addictive.
Story looks good. Still, you need to fix those multiple blank lines, they are unpleasant read unless you use them for dramatic pause.
My two cents: So far not too bad, but you could really use an editor to go over your writing to give it a good cleanup and a smidge of polishing.
Great start, keep it up.
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Why Than again i dont know the MC race yet.
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Cant be helped i guess ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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LoL... That... A new view point for sure...
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True.
Looking forward reading the edited version
Displaced or self insert?
Cutie cover is hilarious!