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i liked it indeed
Someone was bound to make a Protogen story, I too was at the process of making one before, just didn't get to finish making it. Well.... good job being the first one, i guess, not quite what I expected, but good story either way. Pls. Continue.
I like the story but please spell check.
I'm interested to see where this goes.
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what the cog?
Not a bad start. I look forwerd to seeing were this will go. Now if i may be so bold. You should think about getting him a sword soon. Not only would it be good for self defense in a close fight, having the right one would look purity cool. One example/suggestion i could give would be the sword zero (a coincidence i swear) uses in borderlands 2. i1.wp.com/makezine.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/05/zero-sword.png?resize=1200%2C670&strip=all&ssl=1
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I was thinking something more akin to Murasama from metal Gear Rising would fit the tone better.
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Now I'm imagining it as the combination of your suggestion and his, a blue version of hf murasama blade so to speak.
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This story does have the Star Wars tag on it. So, lets just give him a lightsaber and be done with it.
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Why not both?
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Dark blade for example
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Also, some Mandalorian equipment would help, but maybe it should look different but have the same functionality
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Have to agree with Regret12. Chang the color to mach zero's armor and it would look pretty good.
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Personally i think that would be over kill. Besides hf murasama would fit better with the image.
Maybe something from Prey?
Like fabricator and recycler
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Now i wish i looked for this before i posted the last comment.
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You better not puss out and stop doing this you always keep putting stories o hiatus or quitting stop doing that I really love these stories and everytime its gets good you QUIT IT STOP IT!
DUUUDEEE! I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY ALREADY
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As far as close combat goes hes extreamly strong and his default fist attack is reinforced with power claws.
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Purrrfect!
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Raiden was no slouch with hand to hand ether, that didn't mean he dropped his sword. Aside from the potential of earth pones, dragons, and all other psychically powerful races out there? There comes a point were it's not about just power, but style as well.
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The moment a dragon needs to be defeated he will use long range weapons or just orbital bomb the shit out of the enemy 'mass Effect 3 reaper on tuchanka' style
Pinkie Pie needs to make a:
'welcome aliens to Equestria party'
How many set do the ship have for the MC?
Exploration / research - confirmed
Combat - confirmed
Aquatic Terrain- confirmed
How about avian equicment?
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Also he has a ship full of droids. Pretty sure asking a dreadnought captain to 1vs1 a dragon is a bit to abstract
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Style.
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Pinkie Pie makes your Argument invalid.
Pinkie Launcher:
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I think i win by default?
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Dante is calling you.
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Agreed
I loved this chapter, I forgot to track but thankfully to undertotem I had looked at this and saw my mistake and read this chapter, and I Love it! Please keep working on this and not just quit, please
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You have one. but thees three say
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I cant tell how many of those are references, but I definitely think Reach is a Halo reference
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Have a Friendship Bazooka to match your Pinkie Launcher.
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*Brohoof* 》》》/)(\《《《
Time to bring out the big guns in the comment section
Like the story so far pretty good. Keep it up
Me:MOOORRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!?
Alucard:OOH THIS WILL BE FUN😈😈😈😈😈
Isnt your dreadnought extreamly big? How did you land it in a forest? Wouldnt a free space be better by any chance?
Obi-Wan Kenobi: hello there
To bad you removed the pictures
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It's a dreadnought scoutship from what he said. He mentioned that it was similar to the Normandy from Mass Effect. More than likely the Normandy SR2 from Mass affect 2 &3 and that it was bigger so I am going with the size of a light cruiser, which can land on planet surfaces.
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General Kenobi!
I have no ides why someone didn't do this yet.....
Are They actually smart in the series is haven't watched it yet
Hesitation is sign of self-aware. This make these droids on the same level as minions. Personally, I think it is better than monologue zero-one machines.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH!! gonna need a (TF2) Medic for that one
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Kinda not really. They are good at what they were designed to be, which is expendable cannonfodder. As such their droid brain is very limited and easily stressed. Anything past walking, shooting and baisc combat and they get confused. They have the intelligence of a child and are just as easily distracted.
greet
Awesome start 👍
Zero? Classic name.