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I dont know why i just got a flashback when i read this. I feel like i was in fact saddened. It was sad what happened to him.
And looks to be we have a new crew member and the Star Fox crew is ready to take off on their search. Boi aren't they in for a treat.
Well, I’m proud of Spike making a decision all on his own. Rainbow proving a point Zero made about ponies being Xenophobic most of the time, though to be fair none of them has ever seen a spaceship before. But, really, they panicked over nothing.
As for Star Fox, well, they’re in for a surprise. And Fox better not get all jealous. He broke up with her and he can’t just hook back up with her, and forget about that choice.
another good chapter that i enjoyed reading, keep up the great work
It's Fay, not Faya. Lose the A.
Okay,I really loved this, and I'm happy Spike is joining the crew, also I really loved the fact you made this chapter 2k words rather then 1k
The chapter needs heavy edits. Until im getting my pc fixed i can only provide small help.
Very nice chapter with a good length. Now we have 2 Biological crewmates But can you provide the necessary food for the dragon teen? How do you avoid cultural / technical mixing? If you let him know the details of something, he might give Twilight enough knownlage to create new tech from it.
I recommend basic person to person unarmed close combat & pilot or commanding training for Spike. Give him two droids as guides and to keep sure he dont hurt himself...
Make sure to get him checked by the medic droid. Dont want any containment problems with him. More important a medical overall Examination wile hes healthy. You get information on his race and his diatary needs for your data archiv.
Love the story and the chapter. an idea for part of a later chapter is were zero rebuilds Krystal's spaceship or builds her a new one as a gift.
As long as you don’t pull some weird shit like (out of nowhere he becomes an alicorn and bangs everyone) I’m pretty sure this can reach 400 likes easily. Love where the story is going and most of all I love the characters.
Is that picture a new and improved more awsome looking pelacan?
Another thing for zero since hes a protogen which is false since hes not 40% artifical and not 70% artifical hes closer to a primagen than a protogen and probably wouldint have a digestive track there for making him eating cake redundant
You bastard pinkie! YOU ATE THE SACRED CAKE PEICE!
Someone did an oopsie.
No. Freaking. Way. You somehow managed to slip a fallout reference in.
Greats edits ones more
Very enjoyable reading experiences do to fluid text to speech function 👍
There's a you missing.
calm
sound like
Ah a pelican
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my thoughts exactly, though it had some upgrades that I don't know about from halo.
LMFAO the insanity is real. Monster in town, must be the pretty fox hanging out with the alien!