Page generated in 0.026 seconds
Total duration
1,038 users online
1,731,170 hits today, 2,205,040 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
He is probably one of the only people in the world that has no trouble understanding pinke pie. As for zero pulling a yang with his arm?
Finally, someone who isn't stupid with giving away technology like it's nothing and for free
If this rule is real or he thought it up doesn't matter, he isn't stupid
If a race can't advance and invent it themself no matter how long they exist and are stagnate and stuck in medieval age with only some electronic like devices(probably only working thanks to magic) they shouldn't be helped to advance
Or at least if they will, they should be helped if an individual or organization, nation, etc will have control over manufacturation, rules, etc and make sure they will advance and not kill themself or be a danger to themself and them
Where's the reference to Star Fox? I found some to Star Wars, not Star Fox.
10045096
Soon my friend soooooon
Ahhh, the gold ol detachable arm roose.
I like it hehe
Did you have a link?
Would make a nice chapter or three
Whats that?
Its a detached arm heavy?
I know i forget something i hold in my hand but nothing that heavy...
Lol the end had me dying.
Please keep going, loved this and that ending was really funny
Great chapter. To bad its so short
Walking around alone could be dangerous. Should you not get at least one support drone follow you? As unlikely it is... If you lose contact wile in a damaged state your basicly boned...
10045247
Don't worry he will get a friend in the next chapter
10045315
Yay
10045320
WHO IS THAT DROID!?:
10045315
Not going to ask for a HK unit but someone to support you in time of need. No one Explores alone unless he is restricted for good reasons... Maybe a 'Jedi Fallen Order' droid? BD-1 can literally be like a bagpack and is still better than nothing.
10045346
Yeah, but I would have something that would be an mix of combat and utility
10045353
His companion is one of the most scariest B-1 battle droids ever.
10045354
Cool
10045354
B-1 are simpel security/battledroids actualy...
I would go for a Commando or Commanding droid.
10045384
trust me this one is more scary than any commando droid
10045410
Unless you talk about Mister Bones i dont see it really...
10045462
*smiles evily*
10045511
Owo should I be very afraid? like "the arma Zeus made a mixed minefield" scared? or "the ARMA Zeus set up an ambush with 20 tanks" scared?
10045652
Both?
10045667
that's bad if both... not even a bunker would save us from the fear
10045703
Yep yep, but seriously tho, I don't think Connor would give Zero a Titan from 40k
10045709
what he has planed for the droid... may end up being scarier...
10045511
am I right?
10045718
...you maybe right, but I would rather this not to turn into a fuck festival of death and blood
10045728
amen to that one... hope I am over reacting...
I had a thought about the visors. I apologize if i step on any one's toes with this, it is not my intent to mess with the protogen lore or its community. It wont be long be for some on asks about zero's and wonders what his face looks like. May be you could take a page from the hanar from mass effect. Similar to how the hanar covet there names the protogen could covet their face's. The reason for this comes from the function of the visor itself. Translator, probably a system for re-breathing and filtering toxins from the air. Not to mention the HUD and all its uses (can picture something like from the metroid prim series). So the question comes why would you take it off? After some time it becomes weird to be with out it. So in time one's one face becomes something they hold close, something to be shared with those closest to them. Just a thought.
The story is good, It does need some editing, but is really interesting.
10045807
Actually, the visor is kind of part of their face, the visor is, well, their face really, if they take it off or lose it they die, it's the thing that's keeping their eyes in place (this is just what I can remember of them) and the whole thing is made up of special nanites so yea
Might want to read this for details
https://www.deviantart.com/youngwolfen/journal/Protogen-and-Primagen-Visors-Explained-723821933
10045807
And by the way, your not stepping on anyone's toes
10045807
Yeah I was kinda making zero's visor similar to quarians
10045807
You use far too many emojis
10049653
Meh... I seen worse
How many pony smiles do we have?
42 on my mobile phone
wrestling
So, how fast can he go?
Edit: On a more serious note, you really need an editor, because it's hard not to point out the numerous errors I often find per sentence. If you'd like, I can go through and make some proposed edits?
10055290
I have one mate
Designation
Zero used pranking, it is super effective.
Okay the end to this chapter is funnying.
Btw im taking this boulder with me *picks up boulder and walks away*
Very cheap and a pretty big no go
10045353
Perhaps Legion from Mass Effect
10045807
Interessting idea.
10046669
Love the race
10122006
Than again alien humor might be tough to understand without context...
Great edit. Very enjoyable reading experiences
Snrk. But why would they run away? Surely they would immediately start panic apologizing?