"Hmmm I don't see any visible injures on you Mr. Krystal how do you feel?"

Mr.?

(The reach) (one hour after the destruction of the black death) (Med bay)

Wait... You destroyed the enemy destroyer ? Damn

"Its fine...please get yourself killed," The droid stated as Krystal smiled.

???

"I know this may sound weird asking you this but..."

He sat back down in his seat.

"Would you like to join my crew?"

Yay a new Organic for the team Did Protogen have the options to enhance others? Pretty sure a good multi function spacesuit and Visor would do wonders. But how about medical implants?

Last i checked you landed with Crystal in your hangar wile your Vulture Droid kick the Fighters ass. But what happend to the main ship?

How about something like this.

And

"Its fine...please get yourself killed," The droid stated as Krystal smiled.

I lost it here, I started laughing because it was just out of nowhere. There's a 'don't' missing, I know but it was so out of the blue I laughed.

Looks like a team is being made aey?

Fuck you Star Fox you ass.

"Hmmm I don't see any visible injures on you Mr. Krystal how do you feel?"

Miss or Ms.

I’m currently almost done with writing the first chapter that your story inspired me to write and it just so happens that the crew of my ship happens to contain the KCX series droids and the same medical droids too lol

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To be fair, he is piloting a fully upgraded Dreadnought with full fighter complement

Been waiting for this and it was damn funny, and I loved it, also, Fox you ass!

That was kind of short but it was good

"Hmmm I don't see any visible injures on you Mr. Krystal how do you feel?" The robot asked as it moved aside letting her close her mouth.

Ms. Krystal maybe?

Goddammit. Fox you dumbass! Ah, forget him Krystal. Zero will take care of you.

"Its fine...please get yourself killed," The droid stated as Krystal smiled.

Ummmm.....Uhhhh.....I mean....okay?

Okay, I think you need someone to edit for you. It isn't unreadable, but it is beginning to give me a headache.

"Hmmm I don't see any visible injures on you Mr. Krystal how do you feel?" The robot asked as it moved aside letting her close her mouth.

Mr. Krystal?

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Yes but i wannt the epic fight to happen on screen ( i send 2 videos for inspiration ). The Pirates would be the Enterprises crew

Great work keep it up

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Its a droid that want to be a battledroids but is now stuck with helping meatbags.

Or his Vocabulary missed a critical 'dont'

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A Medical droid that hates organics...that sounds absolutely hilarious.

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Reminds me of HK-47 Pacifist update

I'm pretty sure Fox's reasoning is more than slightly off. Seriously, just having been on Team Fox will have made Krystal enemies and now her being off and without backup that the team is, she is now or was in a LOT of danger.

Also, LOVE the med droid's comment

"Its fine...please get yourself killed," The droid stated as Krystal smiled.

Seriously hilarious coming from a med droid

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Your welcome. I think the idea of a medic droid dislike his meatbag patients is funny as hell. So i hope he didnt correct this mistake Best story/game Features based on mistakes

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I needed to fix it cause I was going for a doc mitchell feel

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Awww... Now im sad for the battledroid that was made a medic droid hating his patients and was fighting his way for the death of his enemys by Keeping his meatbags alive. . .

"Well, I was raised thinking it was polite to help a lady in trouble."

Wasnt he made and programed that way?

"So, Krystal, since when does a pretty Vixen like yourself have a couple of Pirates hot on your tail?"

Pretty sure that question has answered itself

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Agreed, also I would have loved a medic Droid that hated his meatbag patients, that was funny as hell

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To our character has a dick? Didnt think his 30% Organic included a interspecies reproduction systems. Protogen are made not born...
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Did we get a fighting report like the two videos i linked as inspiration at the comment secton start of this chapter? If you have bad guys... Let em go out in a GLORIOUS SPACE-FIREFIGHT

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Well...yes he does have one it just that he can't have kids cause of his machine nature

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At least he can have fun. With 70% maschine his Vixen shouldnt suffer from lacking a male with Stamina👍

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Smug:
pbs.twimg.com/media/DXrI1UIWAAAAw0F.jpg

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Well, that's not apart of protogen race, but I am kinda happy with what you did there

If you do rebuild Krystal's ship, may I suggest the Miy'til Starfighter from the Hapes Consortium? Its a good, rare, and unique fighter that's modular, can utilize astromechs, and can outpace the model 2 A Wing. There's also a variant called a Rapier Defender utilizing an X Wing cockpit.

Hmmm? Okay, I got the part where she was kicked out of Fox's team. But I still didn't see why she was chasing by the pirate?

If i put every gramatical error ive seen id be here all night. Please get an editor. (Yours truly a helpful reader)

"Thank you Kr-33, for bringing her here."

The one comma ive seen, and it doesnt belong.

"Can I get you anything water? Soda?" Zero asked.

I found where the comma belongs

"Well, after what happen to Peppy he thought it was too dangerous for me to be on the team. Thought it was best to kick me off." Krystal said as she rubbed her eyes. "And he said it was better if we weren't together."

Dick move star fox

Zero was speechless at what her head as she cried at the memory, Krystal sniffed before she looked up to see the red droid hold out a tissue.

Where did he get a tissue? Why would he have tissues? Zero can’t cry with out taking his visor off and he has no reason to cry.

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To clean his cutting implements of course.

Connorcooper well done on all the edits overall

Zero was speechless at what her head as she cried at the memory, Krystal sniffed before she looked up to see the red droid hold out a tissue.

he heard

"I wouldn't break up my girlfriend if one of my friends got hurt...its stupid." Krystal didn't know what to think but as zero got up with a looked of determination. "As matter of fact if that happens I'll be sure to keep the ones I love closer, so I know they will be safe!"

I'm sorry here, but I want to kinda headbutt Zero here.
I know its just a story here, but if we go by what has been told, Fox was scared for her safety.

What he did may not have been smart or reasonable, but it made sense to him at the time. He looked at himself or his crew as the intended target and hoped that if she was far, far away and removed, she'd be safe.

Of course she wasn't, but he still had to try in his own mind to keep her safe rather then in the thick of it.

So, Zero is being a teenage hormone malfunctioning idjit

Logic