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I have my eyes on you Celestia you're safe for now but you're still a bitch.
Yay
Who else would know about the “important” technology apart from Celestia, Luna, and the mane 6? I just can’t wait for her to realize just how advance he is compared to literally the entire planet
Great work keep it up
Hmm, it could be one of Equestria’s enemies, or one of their Nobles. I’m leaning towards Nobles, or perhaps a certain spoiled prince we’ve forgotten about?
I know, far-fetch, since we’ve never seen him anywhere in the story, yet. However, is it possible for him to have been eavesdropping on Zero and the princesses conversation without being notice?
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Good chapter, I Really did love it, I look forward to more
Did they survived? What will happen to the mercs?
Your Dreadnought is a slow heavy hitting one or?
Might wannt to inform Celestia that you have mercs that will be sold or executed soon... Might help spread the word what happens to filthy thiefs and wanne be adventure intruders...
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
TIME TO RAID THE CAKE PANTRY!!!
Whats the result of the salvage? Anything usefull? Just raw material?
Did you make sure to kill em all and not land on Equestria? How about a report about the 'epic spacebattle' ?
What about Crystals ship? Can it be repaired or do you give her a new one? Just watch out she didnt have anything Protogen would consider to advanced to lose... Wile unlikely i rather not have her jumping away... Maybe a high advanced ship WITHOUT JUMP-engine?
What about muffins? Everyone loved some Variation of them... ♡ Maybe go for Banana ones
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Maybe raid Celestia personal stash to get back at her?
Even if she wasnt involved she is the only real subject. Pranks are allowed. Or is there a anti prank rule for Protogen against self entiteld Nation rulers?
What will Zero do after this Story? Equestria story are full of potencial but with his equicment? Endless adventure ahead untill the day he stops to be. . .
Fox is a idiot by the way... There are no safe jobs if hes a merc with real skills...
Go after the Gilde. If the Organisation if afraid of you after burning the mercs alive infront of it... Dont think the Gilde will allow anyone risking there HQ.
From the description it seems interesting I'll give it a shot
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I agree completely.
I wonder who hired the Guild
Awwww, loving their relationship so far.
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Zero just has to give a Ultimatum to Princess to find out who is involved or there future relationship will be 'not friendly'. 100% This Guild folds like a deck of card if the SUN GODDESS is pissed at em... Also in need to make friendly with the spacetravler before they screw it up for good.
Definitely Celestia
Informative: This Unit has only one question.
Interrogative: Are they using the proper incense?
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Query: what do you mean brother unit?
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Informative: This Unit means to imply that they are not burning the proper incense.
I wish the word count was longer but I love it
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Or it could have been one of the court nobles many of them in the show( Blueblood) are depicted as just sallow enough to try this
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I know. Actualy suggested it. But the best way is to pressure the Tip to let the useless masses fall down...
Well, what are you going to do now?🤔
>w<
Their little fight was adorable XD
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Not mutch of a fight... more like a friendly silly Wrestling.
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I like my suggestions. For all chapters really...
Being badass in General. Since he cant chew bubblegum he might go directly to kicking ass/flank.
I suggest holding orbit or landing on the moon wile Zero has his fun on the surface.
He has Troop/Squad landing ships.
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I wonder what Protogen have as equal for a kiss? They dont has lips or anything near it.
Zero has a crew out of droids and is pretty mutch the same in many regards!
If someone hear something speaking they have a recording of it. What about playing it to the princess of the flaming Buttchecks and than replay her Speech parts to make a point.
The Guild gets dismanteld or Equestria loses his 'neutral' relation to 'hostile'. Than Zero just walks outside like a badass. Might want to project a 8 Bit sunglass and scream in his head ('yeeeehaaaa' like in maiami vice seried)
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Sweet! Thanks.
To bad he isn't using a ProtoGen -_-
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He is hes my own verson of a protogen
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Be that as it may, the rules for ProtoGens are very stricked. One of those being the anatomy, and the fact you can remove the visor without killing the ProtoGen proves it's not a ProtoGen -_-
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Its my OC man
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Ok, but that really isn't what I'm asking.
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Your OC still needs to follow the rules for the species set by the creators of them -_-
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It is the weighters will to use and change a species for the sake of a story and to make their character how they want so I don't see a problem. I also see your point that the species has set rules and I was going to change them for a story I would explain that in the description.
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So, have you ever heard of a little thing called 'plot convenience'?
Oh, and as a side note...I know for a fact they have an organic cardiovascular system, meaning the can breath without their mask as long at the atmosphere has Oxygen.
*Me sitting on a couch*
*the book*
"Huge droids that look like Death Troopers."
Love the story, The action and world building is great. Well done.
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Spaceships impaled by trees? We dont try to land on Kashyyyk were there wood is steel hard...
John jonah jameson
Fox you dumbass dog (dog is a grown up fox for some reason blame scientists) the galaxy is full of danger even here. Its no less dangerous than being on a station.
Great edit. Almost perfect but like 200% better than the original