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Iām ready for more.
another chapter
NIce Star Wars the Clone Wars: the Animated Series reference. The training scene with Count Dooku training Grievous, nice.
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I'm happy someone saw this!
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you know for a fact do you?
Funny seeing how i ask the creators of the species what would happen if the visor was removed.
The is answer is as follows "Blood everywhere, and death OWO" Merra co-creator of the ProtoGens and PrimaGens
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Hot for action to rip pirates a new one (^-~)/ and loaded with guns to rip there ship apart from the inside (ā”_,ā”)
Short and sweet indeed. Really loving this story so far, mate.
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it's all fictional y'know? I'm not gonna rag on you for trying to let the author and readers know that zero isn't representative of what all "canonical" protogens are like but it honestly just seems like the author is having fun with it so they changed some stuff around such as zero being able to remove the mask. I get where you're coming from though! when something is established (in lore or even in the canon of a fictional species) and someone sets aside or changes certain aspects it can get under ones skin no? If you hold a suspension of disbelief while reading something you can come to enjoy it just a bit more such as magic in harry potter or a time traveling DeLorean, we know magic and time travel aren't real but for the sake of the story we ignore that fact.
Anyways, sorry if this went off on a tangent but the long and short of it is, the author had a little bit of fun when writing about zero's capabilities that don't match up to canon protogens and thats ok! (at least in my eyes) and I hope no one else rags on you for pointing out that fact but holding a suspension of disbelief will do wonders for enjoying any fictional story!
As for my view on the story? I like it and I look forward to seeing more!
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Ok Casanova time for you to go in the freezer for a bit.
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I'd be fine with it if he'd stop saying it's a ProtoGen (because it's not at this point) or edit the story so he gets it right. I refuse to budge on this matter due to how stricked the rules are.
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I have to agree, me personally is fine with this but very annoyed he's calling it a protogen even tho it's not really, also I hate the fact people think it's perfectly fine if a protogen "take's off" their "mask"
Good chapter bud, good to see Spike is being treated well and isn't seeing things as black and white
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You have better luck trowing me into the engine cooling system
Nice you take the comment section for inspiration Spike will be better for it. Dont think Twilight will be to happy with him Good team dynamic. What will be next i wonder.
Ones they meet with Fox team i hope he get a nice verbal bitchslap for the shit he pulled with Kryastal
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That I can agree with plus a boot to the head.
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I raise by a ' rabbit Tasmanian devil '
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And one for Jenny and the wimp
Wise decision not pissing off Celestia.š Also I must ask, how do you paste images on this fan site without getting nothing on the pasting block?š¤
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Top right on comment section
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WHAT?!
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I'm glad someone finally agreed with me. I've asked the creators of the ProtoGens for thier thoughts on the matter and she flat out told me his OC isn't a ProtoGen
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1. In the comment section to the right of the comment sending person is a symbol loking like that ' >> ' click it to get a link for the person to get linked. ( that you already now but still step 1).
2. On the very right the the lines stacked on top of eatch others opens the multifunction selection.
Picture and video are next to eatch other. You cant miss it.
I'm going to dislike, but only because someone has to. Otherwise it's... not perfect, but nothing is perfect so that doesn't count. Instead, it's magnificent!
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Yeah, no offense to Connor (the author of this story) I don't really like it when someone does something like this
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Well I wanted to add some unique things for the main character
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And that's completely fine and cool, but I'm just trying to say it's not actually a protogen because of the rules and all, don't take this in a bad way bud, I mean keep going, just saying your OC is technically not a Real protogen
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By all means keep doing what ya doing buddy
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Just say it's not a ProtoGen please, because with it as is people might start making "ProtoGens" with a face under the "mask" and it'll cuase problems for the creators of the ProtoGens and PrimaGens
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Wait, are your referring to the 'Add Link' button?
If he moves faster than she can react, then she won't be able to block.
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Maybe im not sure... Hope it helped anyway. Otherwise just experiment with a comment by editing it untill all options are exhasted and the closest to your target result is archived
Great story I hope you keep it up
I hope new chapter comes out soon
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I feel like that is fine in and of itself, but if a setting or species has specific rules for what can and cannot happen then they probably should be followed as closely as possible.
Otherwise it would sort of be like saying a character in Warhammer 40K is a female Astartes even though it is canon that the augmentations are only compatible with male physiology.
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I have to agree, but to be honest, I'm fine with him doing this, considering of what I know this is the first actual fanfic with a protogen (Ish)
But yeah I gotta say respect the rules the creator or Creator's have put into place
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Fair enough.
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That's all i want him to do is follow the rules, but he seems hell bent on not doing so.
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Yea, well let's just be happy he hasn't made his OC even more unprotogen, to Connor, no offense bud, and I look forward to more of ya work
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the only thing thats not protogen is the mask everything is is following the rules I promise
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He has a mask and a face.
The ProtoGens visor is surgically attached to thier skull and subsequently have no face unless you count the visor as one.
When i talked to the creators they said your character isn't a ProtoGen
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Okay then bud
More man
Really soon as I heard the beginning of this though of Star Wars the clone wars
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Halo called.
Good old Spike, the lovable punching bag.