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Silas5399


Just another guy that writes and games as a hobby

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Well, now the waiting game.

I don’t want want the applejack Parent to die

Honest question how did the whole merchant that displaces you start

Two be honest, I'm a little envious. You not only have main character as Dark Spyro with Cynder's abilities, but also HTTYD. And about the letter, you should bring a little more focus on those.

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No idea but it why I started writting it is very fun

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The thing at the end is not a letter is part of a newpaper

"Grampa hurry up or well be late." My grand daughter said I am a 70 year old man i had gray hair wrinkles on my face and blue eyes.

Pfft, yeah. THAT sounded organic as fuck.

A C T I V A T E _ I N S T A - N O P E

The story is really enjoyable but the grammar man, I am not a native English speaker but man

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If you taking about the dragons they will in later in the story

Great hope to see more soon đŸ¤©

Like I said before harlock. I'm available for giving out ideas, let alone others things depending on what they are.

"It seems your scales are stronger than we anticipated so we will have to skip the blood test and go to the magic." He said as he cast a spell that enveloped me in his magic, then a black substance was drawn from my body which then was put in a container.

Why would you try to stick a needle through what is quite literally naturally grown armor? If you have to pull from where his scales fully cover then why not go under them instead of trying to go through? Why not try where the scales are naturally thiner and weaker, such as the inside of the elbow or back of the knee? And if his scales are really so tough as to make any of that impossible then why not pull from where there are no scales, such as the inside of the mouth?

In summary, this doctor is not qualified to be a doctor if he can't think of any of those himself and just chooses to skip the test instead.

Text is missing punctuation, sometimes an entire paragraph without. It is tiring to read like this.

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The next chapter reveals the suprise the merchant mentioned

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Because no matter what you do you can't cut through Plot Armor, that's why Protagonists always win....

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No their are still ways to kill him

Comment posted by SethFilms deleted Aug 6th, 2019

Sorry impatience ..

hey good story its been awhile how have you been

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meh not sure how i feel about being an uncle soon i have mixed feelings:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::twilightoops:

I have a feeling the event is going to happen, and not in a good way.

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What are you talking about

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The patients yes they are

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What did you think was going to happen

I think you meant to say basement.

Do you know whom I'm talking about? And --to answer your question (in which case you should put up a question mark more often)-- well they might meet their possible canon fates.

I cant wait! :derpytongue2: :pinkiehappy:

I like this alot but needs a grammar and spell check

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Seriously I thought that Spyro would use snark against that thing that is wicked enough to not deserve a slur

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Well he will likly be punished if he swears and he is not a spyro he only has his body

Death will not be cheated, he will get his marks.

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Not like swears but more like sarcastic comments, and I didn't mean he is the Spyro but is what he is calling himself

Was there an update or did you accidentally post a chapter?

SLOW DOWN, BUDDY! You're making one chapter a day, you might end up burning yourself out.

"Hey how much is that ring." I heard and looked to see a man buying a ring from a shady merchant but me and my family kept walking.

it's him

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