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Being the only human in a world where the inhabitants are anthropomorphic ponies is not easy, especially for Jack. Two months ago, he arrived in Equestria with no idea how he got there. He tried to befriend the inhabitants of the town of Ponyville, but it's not so easy when everypony sees you as a monster and the so-called Princess of Friendship doesn’t trust you either. However, at the local Ponyville Festival, he will give one last try, to prove to everypony he’s not a monster. And he'll do it all, with a guitar and a little help from a mare named Applejack.


This story was edited by The Fan Without Face.

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Comments ( 11 )

Hi. Good story but just one question is his name Zack or jack?

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His name is Jack not Zack and that part was a mistake from me, I have fix it.

There are a few stories where no one accepts a human. Ending comes to mind

Might want to give credit to the lyrics.

I would wish for a continuation of this story because I believe Twilight is already regretting everything... especially after Princess Celestia has finished chewing her out... another song "Regret" comes to mind...
It would become great, a Semi-Happy-Ending with Twi publicy appologizing and the whole Town appologizing... at least in my mind.. great story I just wish for a Happy End the suspense is killing me :)

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You want a sequel? We’ll see.

Lol, you need to make this a chapter by chapter story,even if it's just two or three chapters, you should complete it,as it's a great first chapter

Twilight was such a bigoted and hypocritic bully to Jack was because he's a human and because of the past misdeeds that humanity did that she automatically assumes he's dangerous and violent.

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I would love a sequel to Choices where he does return to Ponyville, perhaps to surprise Applejack and everyone else in Ponyville

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