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Lux Tenebris
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Lux Tenebris
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It's definitely interesting so far, but I'd suggest getting an editor to look this over. There are a plethora of small grammatical errors and misspellings that could easily be fixed. Besides those small things, it's good, keep it up!
i agree.
Let me get this straight: you make (I assume, solely based on looks and tags) an alicorn bat-pony bastard son of King Sombra, and you name him Lux Tenebris. With Lux being Latin for light.
Am I the only one who notices this? This is a glaring contradiction.
7860568 Or, considering the fact that the mother was apparently raped to make the child (if I'm reading into this correctly) then she could have named him Lux on purpose, something like "her little light that came out of a dark situation" or something sappy like that
7861169 Racking up edgy points either way. Lux isn't salvageable.
7861343 to each their own I suppose
7861376 We can agree on one thing; this story needs edits.
7860568 not bat pony as you will most likely read in the upcoming chapters. And yeah I know it needs edit but me being Swedish I'm not exactly as good at English grammar like someone who lives in for example brittan
I will most likely edit the living crap out of this story when I reach chapter 10
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
7873537 I think It's Because of My grammer
Don't know why it's rated so bad it's very enjoyable
7987167 thanky you! As a writer I love hearing that people enjoy what I do
I think it's rated fairly badly because of my grammar and I'm sorry for that 
But English not being my mother language(or whatever you call it)it's a bit hard knowing when I do minor grammar failers, anyway thanks for your support
Killing a princess? Bit of a tall order, not to mention the repercussions if she succeeds. This is an interesting read, but just a small note, you could probably expand on descriptions a bit. Preferably during scenarios where conflict is involved, but that's just my opinion. Cant wait for the next chapter.
7989200 thanks for your support. I try to be as descriptive as possible but english only being my second language complicates things a bit
Good so far. Keep it up.
Lux is an alicorn, right?
8107522 No, I understand why you think so because of the wings but he's not an alicorn
good job, nice story
8436560
Thank you ^_^
8436568
You're welcome
This can mean two things... I am intrigued by the mystery of which one hecis using....
Please don't tell me that he's "gonna make Equestria great again".
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Thank you for reading the story at all xD I'm currently working on chapter nine. If you wonder what "the heart of a mortal" can mean then it will be quickly answered as the story progress