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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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This story is a sequel to Twilight slowly reads a book


Reading the prequel is by no means necessary, minus to understand the final punchline. Sorry.
With the book's ending coming close, Twilight has become... irritable. This is your journey to regain... well, really just your place on her couch. But that seat will be yours still!

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Comments ( 17 )

Ok for April Fools...:ajsleepy:

No it's not that the prank is bad or anything, just April Fools jokes have been lost on me since the year my Art Teacher Did a fake death prank.:pinkiegasp:

I'm not kidding eithier...weirdest day ever-it bugs me to this day and it happened back when I was in the 8th grade. :pinkiecrazy:

I read this though took a few min- the spaceing made it hard to read after it kept going for a while- the white background started to hurt my eyes lol.

Now i'm just ranting- here have a Cupcake.

~Hands over Cupcake.~

And have a hoofs up! :pinkiesmile:

5817050 Yay for a cupcake. Also, I know the feel. I'm a day late because of deep depression trying to get this fucker out gave me.

Y'know, this was actually amusing in its own right. It gave me a few chuckles, particularly the bit about Roseluck.
:twilightsmile:
Sorry the other version wasn't allowed, but this is a nice compromise.
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You can always change the background to be a little darker. There's lot of options.

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7.8/10 too much seeing -IGN

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Lol well it's out now!- that's the good part.:yay:

I know the feeling too trying to get things out at a certain time but can't, I'm already like two days late on a update but I just have soooo much to check out-to make sure it looks at least halfway decent and everytime I read through my work I see more and more mistakes.:ajbemused:

But take a smile in that it's finished and not a frown that it took more time then you wished. :pinkiehappy:

I laughed too much at the paint drying part

See something you shouldn’t.

Probably the best line.

This was, well, very different from what I usually see around here, and that's not a bad thing. That's not a bad thing at all. There's so much not said in this, and I like that. I like stories you have to think about. Stories that don't spoon-feed you everything like you're some kinda fool. This was very simply written, with barely any detail, but just enough to be able to piece together what's going on and why. I'm sad to see this got rejected before. It's rejections like that which stifle creativity by stomping out new ideas and experiments. Perhaps not new in this case, at least not in general, but it's fresh around these parts. I, for one, thought this was a very interesting read, and I had a lot of fun reading it. Nice work.

5820114 Yeah. I've been told that some liked the fact that it ended up like this, but getting the one sentence per chapter style rejected hurt. *sigh* Thank you though. It means a lot that you enjoyed this so much.

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Yeah, that's a terrible reason for rejection. There's no rule against only having one sentence per chapter, just like the previous story did. That was part of the original joke, part of the charm. I mean, yeah, it takes longer, but that's the point. It's slow. Oh well. At least you were able to get it out at all. For what it's worth, I still think it was a fun read, even if you couldn't maintain the style.

5820962 Yeah, I know. They say it was merely a mistake made by Meeester.

See something you shouldn’t.

When you gaze long into an abyss the abyss also gazes into you :moustache:

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P.S. You really only need to watch the first 5 seconds.

I don't know why but I got mega sad vibes from this...

This was amazing.
And the ending was super sweet.:twilightsmile:

Have a like.

so...is anon dating Twilight Sparkle, or is he just living with her?

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