Applejack realizes she hasn't seen her friend Rainbow Dash in a while. Actually, quite a while. A couple of weeks to be honest. Yeah, actually a month. So, she decides to go and have a little chat with her, as a good friend would. Just to check, nothing more. She did look a little sad last time she saw her and ... actually, she looked like a trainwreck.
However, Rainbow claims there is nothing wrong with her.
Nothing at all.
Really, it's nothing.
NOTHING! *CRUNCH*
Dialogue only, because I wanted to try it. Cover by Artypaints, who made this piece inspired by the story. My first fanart! WOOOO!
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“He’s pining for the fjords.”
That's not Daring Do.
I was afraid Tank had died for a bit there.
Might want to go through for a spelling check though. There's a lot of spots that need fixing.
6872863 Well, there are fjords in South America , and with that jungle she’s always working her way through there must be at least some pining for fjords.
6872916 I blame my Phone and it’s infernal spelling check. Thanks.
6872863 Do I smell a Monty Python reference?
Wtf did I just read?!
Thumbs up from me
aw, this was sadly cute!
Ogres, are like onions, they have layers
Huh, what don't you find out by just eating onions.
AJ is lucky Dash keeps so many with her all the time
Now I need onions.
Nice story, even if 'Dialog-only' isn't my preference.
And that ending... Hilarious!
But you forget the source of the coverart. I'm sure the artist would want you to add it.
6881641 Yeah, you’re right. Done. And glad you enjoyed the story.
It looks like its all ogre now
Shrek is love, Shrek is life.
You glorious, absolute bastard. This is fantastic.
Craine...
6883109 Thank ya Kindly!
Not a fan of this layout. It's actually really discombobulating to me. I couldn't even finish. I'll give it another attempt after breakfast, when my brain is working a little better.
6906376 ok. Thanks for giving it a chance!
Great story
Pretty adorable fanfic!
I made fan art of your story:
http://artypaints.deviantart.com/art/Onions-590897463?ga_submit_new=10%253A1455507633
6937128 HOLY cow! My first fanpic! I don't have words... Thank you! Thank you! It looks great! Can I use it as cover? Please!
6937951
Ah! Glad you like it!
Of course you can.
I have to say, as an advocate FlutterDash shipper, this was not one of my favorite stories.
6953643 ok.
Hm, I now have a sudden craving for onions
Anyways, I really enjoyed this story.
7593874 Onions is surpricingly good for you... thanks.
"crunch"
gotta like Onions since its good for yah..... tho it does a number on your breath tho garlic is even worse on that department lol
7847967 Once in a while she tosses in a breath mint. Probably a strong one to make her eyes wet. You know, in case somepony see.