Detective Inspector Buckem knocks on the door to Octavia and Vinyls house. He believes that Vinyl is a vampire, guilty of the deaths of at least 25 ponies. Will he convince Octavia to help him bring her wife to justice, or will love prevail?
Another one-shot. Halloween Special!
Oh, just so you know. The second chapter and the sequel is VERY optional. If you want the story to end with chapter one, you may. If you want a continuation, you have a second chapter and a sequel to enjoy. I try to please everypony. 
Cover by Pixiecold
Chapters (2)
Even though I saw Octavia being the vampire a mile away, this was still a very good story. Definitely liking and favoriting it.
5211756 Thanks!
Yeah, the twist was kinda obvious. But still, it was well done.
5211873 Plot twists these days... well, its still nice that you liked it. :)
Honestly I didn't expect Octavia to be the Vampire, so the plot twist was surprising. I also was expecting Vinyl to come in at the last moment.
Epic... Loved it would like to see more M. Night Shyamalan... Lol. Keep up the good work.
Oh My Gosh I wasn't expecting Octavia being a vampire
Fun fact: Detectives never act alone. Even if they looks like alone, there are always backup teammates near them. So.... Yeah. She's fucked.
5213076 IRL yes. But this is fiction.
Hmm, this reminds me of this one book you can find in Elder Scrolls: Oblivion and Skyrim. I can´t remember the name of it for the life of me but it is essentially a very similar story.
Very nice fiction nontheless.^^b
EDIT: HA! Immortal Blood! It´s Immortal Blood!
5213124 I can honestly say I never heard of that, but everything is already written, so...
thanks!
Lovely. Just lovely.
I knew what was happening from a very early point in the story, I read Octavia like a book...
well written, but clear to me.
I really hope for more soon!
5213157
True indeed.
My pleasure.^^
Well, nothing too sinful in the desc, other than that cover image.
Not saying is a bad drawing or anything, is just... doesn't feel like matching the fic.
5213947 ok.
5213255 Well... you can try another story of mine, nocturne:the visitor? if you want vampires, that is.
5213226 Thanks!
Eh, I figured either Octavia was in on it, or she was also a vampire. I didn't see the detective fingering the wrong target coming though. Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.
5214480 well I did like this one that's for sure, though I have a list of things to read... OK I will... when I have time
Thought this would be a reference to "My Roommate is a Vampire" but I was WAY off!
I'm glad I read this. Well done, friend!
Nicely done! The sequel brought me here. I like it!
5224336 glad you liked it! thanks!
5223820 thanks, mate! Glad to hear it! :)
*check their address
5225926 Thanks, will change it!
5220622 Well, it's more of a reaction to that one.
We weren’t sure if this was genuine at first, but we performed the test, and there it was.
5399303 We weren't? Oh, damnit!
Sorry, couldn't resist. Thanks! Will fix!
I really like this story! It's too short for Equestria Daily though... Maybe Twilight's Library?
5409386 That was my plan, but that ain't an option any longer. Ah well, the love of the people will be my reward!
Sorry, that sounded snooty. Glad you liked it. thanks!
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Nice
You might want to fix the spelling and grammar errors.
6242972 Sure, why not? Give me some pointers and I'll fix them. :)
This was yes. Me happy very much. Lots much good. Yay.