Whenever you meet someone for the first time, you get one of two impressions: they're a good person, or a bad person. This is no exception. For on that hot summer day I met the girl who would become the most important person in my life, and in more than one way.
[A/N: humanized AppleDash and NightxSharp. Believe it or not, this isn't the secret project I've been working on for the past while. This is actually something I came up with recently and couldn't help but write it. Hopefully it's enjoyable, though it won't update as frequently, it'll just be a side project that I update whenever I get bored enough to write it. Anyway, I hope you like it. I may or may not be upping the rating later on, but I'm not sure. Enjoy your human people!]
nice first chapter Devs keep it up when you can
4847564
What he said,
I want a back story.
4848151 back story? This whole thing IS a back story. So I'm not sure what you mean...
4850184 who? Sharp and AJ?
4850195 I'm gonna go out on a limb and say the girl beside the girl that is supposedly rainbowdash is twilight. Is my guess correct?
4852225 no... Twilight's hair doesn't have cyan or red in her hair. Like, at all.
4852450 ok then I just remembered that sorry I guess that makes me a little
4850184
Yes
4853636 but WHO?! "They" isn't very specific. It could mean anyone!
4856700 thank you someone for being specific for once...
4856700 and it'll be expanded upon sometime soon. In chapter 2 or 3 when something happens that I don't have planned yet. Like I said, I'm only doing this as a side project, that and to see how well I can do with description in fiction for later stories that are entirely my own and not based on anything.
When will be the next chapter?
P.S. I love that story so far!?
4968380 whenever I finish it. I'm around halfway through I believe so... Within the next few weeks, probably.
4968621 ok thank you
4968645 up
This is a great story but i think you could use more sexual preferations, to say that people in ponyville are either straight or gay seems a little bit unrealistic.
I'm not some bigot or want you to be mad at me it's just something that caught my eye.
Hm, not bad. Sounds like a normal day, but those are always the most relatable stories and can be quite interesting.
At first I thought the tall girl next to Rainbow Dash was going to be Applejack, but I was wrong.
Loved this part.
Hey! I want to see the bar scene!
Promise you'll at least write that?
Please.
PLEASE.
5713285 In progress/hiatus. Haven't been on Wattpad for a while.
6148611 oh just wait.
Neat chapter.
Neat chapter.
so weird lol......i love weird ;)
I know im more than a year late, and I souldnt get my hopes up, but will this story be continued at all?
7208427 more than likely, yes. I've been taking a small hiatus from FIMFiction in general currently so I can get through some stuff, plus I have a few other stories that I'm currently writing that have taken over priority. I already said in the description that this is a side project that I'll update when I have the motivation, and 4's progress has been... Slow. I honestly don't know what to do with it at presently so I'm letting it sit until I do.
7209085 Yay, im glad it'll be continued in the future, I giess i'll jist have to be patient now.
7209126 feel free to read any of my other stories while you do, as it may be a while before I get back to this.