Night Rain and Sharp Shooter have been having issues with their relationship recently, and this fight looks like it might be their last. Pissed off, Sharp heads to the local bar, and finds help from Applejack and Rainbow Dash, who have seen enough of the couple fighting.
[A/N: Humans with wings and horns! This is also on Wattpad. Looking for cover art, though I may have some already, don't know yet. Written to help deal with writer's block, so it won't be my best work, just a random one-shot.
-Devastation]
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If these "humans" have any pony characteristics besides their names, use the anthro tag. The human tag needs to go.
3807072 nothing but negative reviews. Typical story by me then
3807322 Cough Cough
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But anyways, the thing is that you put Rainbow and Applejack in the tags, so it would show up for those two if I put them in the filter.. But in the description, it said NOTHING of those two. So I either thought that you haven't watched the show and thought that Applejack is Sharp and Rainbow is Night, or you do not know their R63 names.
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Also, that is not a negative review what-so-ever. That is a informational comment. A negative review is if they stood there and commented on how bad that is written or how many mistakes there is.
One last thing, I do not think you are suited for these type of stories. You might be suited for other types of stories, such as adventure or action. Anyways, I hope I helped you.
3812222 please tell me you actually read it?
3812222 also, that avatar pic disturbs me on so many levels
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I liked it.
So you want to not mess with my opinion?
3812229 I did.
3812471 I did not say anything wrong with your opinion. Mr Dev. Said that there is all negative reviews, so I put that underneath so he would see that there is positive reviews. Sorry if you miss understood.
3812482 Oh, ok. That's alright!
3812482 also: I never have and never will write anything r63, I don't even know what r63 is. Though I think it's a gender swap, if what I take from what I have seen is correct
3819662 Rule 63: If the character is male, there shall be a female. If the character is a female, there shall be a male.
Yea, technically.