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Ezrienel


I'm a novelist, published poet, artist and university student. I am a pegasister from Alberta, Canada.

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Applejack and Rainbow Dash are snowed in alone at Sweet Apple Acres, where their constant bickering resounds in the otherwise quiet farm house. If they want any hope of surviving the night, they must put their differences aside take the advice of an old Heath's Warming story: to hold loved ones near.

An Equestrian variation of "A Visit from St. Nicholas" by Clement Clark Moore, entirely rewritten.

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Beautiful! A really awesome christmas present :pinkiehappy:
You found a way to use the rewrite! Very well done!

Cute, as usual. Liked, faved, watched (oh so long ago), and moustached :moustache:

Two things: One, best humaniod AppleDash story i'v seen. Second, Happy Hearth's Warming to all!

Aw that was sweet. You wrote this very good. Just reading this got me thinking about the ice outside my house. Very good story. :ajsmug:

Beautiful story. You should make these one-shots more often. Anything to have more of your writing.
Merry Christmas.

This story has swag....yeah....awesomeness.
Someone put this on TBS or something. I'm serious.
:ajsmug::heart::rainbowwild:

14k words. You sure like to torture me.

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It was supposed to be a short one shot... but 14 stanzas in the original poem and... ahh, phooey, I just got carried away as always. :ajsmug:

What's this? A new story, so close to the holidays? Oh, Ezrienel, you shouldn't have. But I'm glad you did. :rainbowkiss:

aCB

Very nice. The incorporation of "A Visit from St Nicolas", (which is coincidentally my family's tradition as well) with the Hearth's Warming Eve story was inspired. There were one or two things that bugged me, but overall I'm glad I spent my Christmas Eve reading this.

Yet another wonderful story EZ. Thank you for the enjoyable read, and the very Merriest of Christmases to you. :heart:

That was beautiful. :rainbowkiss: Thanks for writing this story, I LOVED it!

This story should have way more upvotes and less downvotes. I know AppleDash, humanized and humanized AppleDash gets lots of downvotes..
But if they'd read an Ezrienel story they couldn't possibly downvote it.

Merry Christmas Ez! :pinkiehappy:

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Ahhh I'm used to the hate by now, awesome people like you guys make it better though!! :pinkiehappy:

A nice gift indeed, Ezry. Finally finished it and as usual I loved every bit. Thank you. Merry Chritsmas to you and everyone.

HJEKJHALDHALEIFGLF OH MY GOSH!!!! THIS HAS BEEN THE BEST CHRISTMAS OF MY LIFE!!! THERE ARE REALLY NOT ENOUGH WORDS TO DESCRIBE HOW AWESOME I THINK YOU ARE!!! HAVE AN AMAZING CHRISTMAS BECAUSE YOU REALLY DESERVE IT!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::moustache:

Wow. Really, really excellent. And the poem absolutely makes this whole piece! Wonderful work.

I would love to hear this narrated by Dustykatt, preferably in video format, it would be so awesome:rainbowkiss:

I would love to hear this narrated my Morgan Freeman. It would just make it that much better than it already is (which is to say, it's pretty damn good)

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OMG that would be so awesome

3712016 you know it would be. And that's why I said it, because it would be amazing. :ajsmug: That is all, Equestria is ours.

-Devastation

This story is perfect and you are perfect.

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Could you BE more flattering?? :twilightblush:

hmm nice now that I have read the shorter half I'm gone to read the first until I'm done that I'm happynoname56 off to read more

best story related to a holiday I've ever read (then again Ez with combination of appledash and a holiday usually will top all) I know its a very late read but it still means all the same for if I read it on its day so I say I hope all of you had a great charismas and a wonderful new year:twilightsmile:
so with a loving good bye, this I happynoname56 trying not to cry at the beauty of this story:pinkiesad2:

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Hahh, yeah, me and AppleDash is a good combination, it seems. :twilightblush: Glad you liked it of course, working hard to keep you interested!! :rainbowdetermined2:

omg so awesome ! your stories just seem so perfect!
hehe in the kissing scene my mind thought of me and my crush ...omg that was weird of them but the story is still awesome and thank you for it ^^:rainbowkiss:

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You and your cruuuuuush~~?? That's awesome!

Man... This was beautiful. I'm so sorry that I never read it before. It was a lovely read~

Guess I'm a bit late but I read this and it literally warmed my heart. It's out of season now, but the message still rings true. I think I teared up a bit but that's okay. This is beautiful and just made me extremely happy. :)

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Aww, well thank you! Glad you could enjoy it even out of season :twilightsmile:

hey your he guy who wrote triple dog,thats a good story

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That is me, though I'm a girl if that matters at all. But thanks :twilightsmile:

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So, Ezrienel, I have been on a binge session with your stories. Starting precisely two-and-a-half hours ago, I've re-read each one except The Barmaid and Penny for an Old Guy.

It's currently 1 o'clock in the morning.

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I'm both flattered and ashamed. Flattered that you seem so pleased by my work, and ashamed that I am robbing you of your rest. But I'm always glad to hear about it :)

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Naaaaah, don't feel ashamed!

Who needs sleep? Silly sleep.

I can't get enough of your stories. I just can't. I'm...I'm addicted. I need to start a support group.

PINKIE!

:pinkiesmile:Sir!

Send out invitations for a party, hiding their true purpose.

:pinkiegasp:That's not nice!

Just DO IT.

:pinkiesad2:Y-yes sir.

Oh for the love of- I'm sorry, PInkie. Just...please do it? Please?

:pinkiehappy:YES SIR!

....

Told you I don't need sleep.

Wow, not many words to describe this one...but that was really heart warming:heart:

That was fantastic. Had me face-hoofing, d'awww-ing, and nervouscited the entire time.

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