Big ponies probably didn’t get lost at all. Especially not in the city. Especially not at night.
Filly Bon-Bon often visits her grandmother in Manehattan. This year, she even gets to spend Nightmare Night there, and go trick-or-treating in the busiest city after Canterlot! Everything is going to be awesome!
That is, until she gets lost in the back alleys of the busiest city after Canterlot and meets a couple of working mares...
A fan-funded fiction. Based on the prompt 'Bon-Bon meets some hookers'. Not nearly as cracky or cloppy as it sounds.
Now with a full cast reading here.
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That was an amazingly sweet little character study that was leaps and bounds better than it had any right to be given the prompt. The only moment that threw me was "They just created her to sell more merchandise!" which is such a surprisingly adult perspective on her favorite comic that it ejected me from what was otherwise a flawless suspension of disbelief. Otherwise, very nice job, and thank you for writing and sharing it!
I have yet to read through this strange story, but I have taken a peek into the book. I plan to read it latter tonight for when I attend the Dreamscape. The art is. interesting? But one should never judge a book by its cover. The words pertained in this story give off a strange vibe, one who's words should be heard from more often...
Glitter Glamour was a stallion?
...processing...
Tim Curry from Rocky Horror Picture Show?
Nice one
A proper old school twist, a journey, plus a look at society and how Halloween crosses over to different folk.
Loved it !
Well, at the description I was thinking: "What?...."
Than I read the story and was like: "Neat!"
Than I read the ending and was like: "....oh dear."
Great story, and cool idea! I look forward to more like this, but coming from you, I'd read damn near anything haha.
Also, that cop....lord, that cop
This may have been one of the best Bon Bon stories I have ever read.
The saddest thing about this is that someone apparently paid for it. Otherwise it's decent, though. I've talked to (not for business reasons) some rather proud and job-satisfied whores in my life, though, so I think it's a bit one-sidedly dour. Then again, they weren't street girls.
This was a great treat, Scribbler! Very good characters and a terrific plot. You have simply got to perform a reading of this. It's just too good!
And on the next Nightmare Night, there was a lot of explaining that didn't actually explain anything.
I found this story much better than I was expecting, to be honest. You managed to capture the emotions and personalities of the characters quite well, and it made for a compelling story that provided quite the unique look into Bon Bon and the rest of the story's main cast. Anyway, keep up the excellent work, and I wish you the best of luck on all of your future projects!
What a great story! Feels galore.
As resident trans girl... Ouch.
Great story though!
Thank you for a lovely little story.
You can has review!
I'm listening to the Pony Tales reading as I'm typing this and I have to say I love this. It's heartwarming.
oh my GOD I LOVE THIS
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Thank you. This is actually one of my favourite things I've ever written.
What an interesting and hilarious Halloween fic!
Just realised that this was based on a prompt: Bon-Bon meets some hookers.
Wouldn't mind seeing more of these OC characters in any of your other stories!